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Dec 18, 2020
12/18/20, 6:36 PM
Love this! The most basic kind of mind control, reward for correct behavior, done so deliciously. And the way the devices' actual purpose was to build muscle... You can guess from my handle on here that I am a *big* fan of gym-based stories. The scenes where he's reacting to being moved into the correct positions, the touch of those guiding hands, were especially relatable. The plot didn't go at all like I expected - I figured Frank had to be getting some action at some point. I would love to see this story continued, especially if they can get their hands on those sensors again. Maybe Frank got them from a kinky engineer friend of his, and he or they track the other down? Maybe the new ones have been perfected somehow, or some new behaviors to be rewarded have been added...? Once it seemed that Frank didn't intend the sexual side effects, at first I thought there wasn't a clear justification for such a straight-to-gay transformation (unless, as I said, the hypothetical actual engineer put that stuff in). Looking back at it, though, I think what you're doing is showing what happens when the real life homoerotic elements of weightlifting/bodybuilding/gym culture are rewarded along with all the other elements - and that's fucking *awesome*!
12/18/20, 6:31 PM
Another author writing about uniforms and hypnosis; glad to see and read your work. This was a really enjoyable story, the group session is really nice and it's been a while since we've had a story where multiple people have pleasure through the hypnosis. I'm a bit scared about the narrating "I", why they're watching, and what their plan is. Basically they're going to upend a rather nice and enjoyable role-playing hypnosis group for some questionable and suspicious reasons. But that's a testament to your writing. Looking forward to the next part.
12/18/20, 5:44 PM
@Roland00 - Thanks bro! @Jockmorphr - Part 3 (and last) is definitely coming. Not quite sure if I'll pull it off today, but it's all plotted. @anon - Thank you sir! @Ruffcub - All I can safely say is things are going to turn out well for Jonas and Brady. @anon2 - I mean, Jonas should be a top himself when he wakes up. But I'm sure someone stands to make money from this.
eigio
12/18/20, 3:12 PM
Suggestion: Older mother and father are looking for their son at the pub. They find him and as they are relieved to find him, they both transform into gay jockstrap clad muscle hunks before his eyes. The son is initially shocked at first, then becomes attracted to them and they go upstairs for a threesome.
12/18/20, 2:57 PM
Congrats and well deserved on your win! Your story had me rock hard and leaking the whole time and I wanted more. Hope you are writing chapter 2, 3, 4, etc. Your building of sexual energy for each of the shop's customers and then ending with group sex put me over the top! Your expressive details of all of the actions occurring made it easy to see it all cum down in my mind. If only that barber shop existed. You are one excellent writer! Well done!
screamingmoist
12/18/20, 2:39 PM
Thanks! It was a fun series to write. It's wrapped up for the moment, but we'll still take the occasional trip.
screamingmoist
12/18/20, 2:34 PM
Glad to see people are enjoying this one!
Anonymous
12/18/20, 2:22 PM
Ya know. Jonas can make some money out of this. Brady slips up,or openly lets up,that Jonas was the one to turn Him into a TOP, Jonas can then get some money out of making other guys into TOPS. If only they had to fuck him to turn Top.?
May 3, 2019
12/18/20, 1:13 PM
luv it. want a little more