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Dec 17, 2020
12/17/20, 6:11 PM
This one reminds me a lot of one of my favorite stories from the Erotic MC Archive, Tabico's "[Adaptation](https://mcstories.com/Adaptation/Adaptation.html)." (I actually wrote a gay male adaptation of that one myself, though I've never shared it). One of the things that makes "Adaptation" so hot, however, is that in the last section of the story, we see the parasitic wasp-controlled protagonist derive sexual pleasure from enslaving their family, bringing them under the parasites' control. So if you ever write a sequel, that might be the way to go.
12/17/20, 5:39 PM
This stripper thing didn't really fit with the story that was developing.
12/17/20, 5:34 PM
Great start. I love the pods, Stais for shipping and hypnosis programing? Love to hear more detail, on the conversion. On next batch. And as Hypnothrill stated, I too love to read more mind control, be for in is put in a pod. Meeting face to face with others being converted. my be he be controlled to help,. Thank you i look for more parts.
12/17/20, 5:29 PM
Can't wait for more
Dec 17, 2020
12/17/20, 4:44 PM
Great start. Needs a sequel telling us what the new drone does for his alien insect masters and how he serves them.
Jun 2, 2020
slavemor
12/17/20, 4:39 PM
excellent stuff, nicely told and fucking hot. Wished to write as good - and seeing something of this in real
Dec 17, 2020
12/17/20, 3:48 PM
Oh that was very cute. Unique in what led to it but the ending was a bit... unfinished? It felt like it could have been longer but it's satisfying to read.
BarashBenski
12/17/20, 3:37 PM
The commissioner actually commissioned the initial comic that lead to this story taking place! Overall, an outstanding portrayal at what happened during the comic, and even expanding on the scenes! Quite an expanse on the short-ish comic I made! Very well done!
12/17/20, 3:25 PM
Brilliant as always. Oh I love an evil doctor :)
Anonymous
12/17/20, 2:29 PM
Thank you for this Christmas gift! I imagine many of us will be eagerly refreshing our browsers that morning as soon as we wake up. Looking forward to the intermediate chapters as well. Lots of ways to get to the end and really enjoy the journey you take us on in your stories.