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screamingmoist
12/16/20, 11:38 PM
Thanks! I purposely didn't use the "straight to gay" tag for that very reason, so I'm glad that came through.
12/16/20, 11:11 PM
I enjoyed it a lot. I confess, I was waiting for the moment he realized he was a top and how much money he'd make and how famous he'd get and he'd leave the poor narrator high and dry.
easdf
12/16/20, 10:54 PM
This was hot as fuck! I love cock to pussy stories (though it would've been great if we had a bit more description on that), but the concept was really cool and I loved that they all only hear a voice yet don't mind it as its powers are in action. Plus the happy ending and the fact that the voice wanted to make everyone happy was great and refreshing in my taste. Excellent work!!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/16/20, 9:30 PM
Excellent! Loved the induction! The mantra was so damned hot. And so true for many of us!
CkSkr
12/16/20, 9:23 PM
I'm ready for a double-header! Thanks, PupScout.
12/16/20, 9:20 PM
Fantastic story! Not only is the mental transformation hot, but as always, the little details sprinkled in the story make it even better (the team of scientists working on the machine all being women, for example, or the implication of world-wide dress code changes). You're one of the masters, Mr. Williams!
12/16/20, 9:03 PM
A fine story. Sure made me hard reading it. Thanks.
12/16/20, 7:58 PM
I really like this. Specifically, i like the implications that this isn't against Luke's will and actually what he wanted. He makes no move to leave once he realizes where he is, he only puts up token resistance, and we get to see his internal thoughts and how uncomfortable he is with himself. When Dave says he's just untangling what's in Luke i believe him. I believe that this is who Luke would have ended up as in a few years or in a different life. When its done, Luke hasn't lost anything. He's still in the frat, he still has his friends, and he's still in college. What he's gained is confidence and people who like him for who he is. In a meta sense the fact that this isn't labeled "straight to gay" also helps in that it implies he was always gay, just far in the closet because he was trying to live up to everyone's expectations of who he should be. Another thing I like is that when he says there isn't anyone in the frat who would like the bar, they drop it and don't push, implying they would never change anyone against their will. A+. Keep up the great work.
12/16/20, 7:48 PM
I so love this story very much,please do more of it, please.
12/16/20, 7:43 PM
I live to serve the virus In all honesty, I thought the formatting of this story was creative and unique. I think a few people didn't "get it," but it was a very original gimmick and I liked it.