Recent Comments

12/17/20, 12:17 AM
@Feed Your Head - Thanks man! I've been playing with purely mental transformations a bit lately, and I'm glad to hear it's good. My favourite detail in this story is how Brady goes through different types of underwear as he gets programmed into a top. @absman420 - Thanks! I went with the subtle dumbing down as the 'price' in this story, but I definitely considered a twist similar to that. It seems like the price was too subtle to pick up on in this telling... which gives me an idea. @Jockmorphr - Thank you sir. I'm really getting the feeling from these comments that folks want to see the consequences.
Jockmorphr
12/17/20, 12:05 AM
@Derek What a great story! And a really fun universe to play in. It would be great to follow these two to see what happens.
screamingmoist
12/16/20, 11:55 PM
Yeah, that's totally fine!
12/16/20, 11:40 PM
I added the coming out tag, was it okay?
screamingmoist
12/16/20, 11:38 PM
Thanks! I purposely didn't use the "straight to gay" tag for that very reason, so I'm glad that came through.
12/16/20, 11:11 PM
I enjoyed it a lot. I confess, I was waiting for the moment he realized he was a top and how much money he'd make and how famous he'd get and he'd leave the poor narrator high and dry.
easdf
12/16/20, 10:54 PM
This was hot as fuck! I love cock to pussy stories (though it would've been great if we had a bit more description on that), but the concept was really cool and I loved that they all only hear a voice yet don't mind it as its powers are in action. Plus the happy ending and the fact that the voice wanted to make everyone happy was great and refreshing in my taste. Excellent work!!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/16/20, 9:30 PM
Excellent! Loved the induction! The mantra was so damned hot. And so true for many of us!
CkSkr
12/16/20, 9:23 PM
I'm ready for a double-header! Thanks, PupScout.
12/16/20, 9:20 PM
Fantastic story! Not only is the mental transformation hot, but as always, the little details sprinkled in the story make it even better (the team of scientists working on the machine all being women, for example, or the implication of world-wide dress code changes). You're one of the masters, Mr. Williams!