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12/16/20, 9:20 PM
Fantastic story! Not only is the mental transformation hot, but as always, the little details sprinkled in the story make it even better (the team of scientists working on the machine all being women, for example, or the implication of world-wide dress code changes). You're one of the masters, Mr. Williams!
12/16/20, 9:03 PM
A fine story. Sure made me hard reading it. Thanks.
12/16/20, 7:58 PM
I really like this. Specifically, i like the implications that this isn't against Luke's will and actually what he wanted. He makes no move to leave once he realizes where he is, he only puts up token resistance, and we get to see his internal thoughts and how uncomfortable he is with himself. When Dave says he's just untangling what's in Luke i believe him. I believe that this is who Luke would have ended up as in a few years or in a different life. When its done, Luke hasn't lost anything. He's still in the frat, he still has his friends, and he's still in college. What he's gained is confidence and people who like him for who he is. In a meta sense the fact that this isn't labeled "straight to gay" also helps in that it implies he was always gay, just far in the closet because he was trying to live up to everyone's expectations of who he should be. Another thing I like is that when he says there isn't anyone in the frat who would like the bar, they drop it and don't push, implying they would never change anyone against their will. A+. Keep up the great work.
12/16/20, 7:48 PM
I so love this story very much,please do more of it, please.
12/16/20, 7:43 PM
I live to serve the virus In all honesty, I thought the formatting of this story was creative and unique. I think a few people didn't "get it," but it was a very original gimmick and I liked it.
Anonymous
12/16/20, 5:46 PM
I live to serve the virus
12/16/20, 4:54 PM
@Grant Spiral - 1994, and it never got past a theoretical paper. Which is too bad, I can picture a bunch of criminals breaking into a WW2 era supply depot and accidentally setting off some gay grenades. @Evan - I'm not sure if Jonas would try to keep Brady's cock all for himself, or if he'd end up managing Brady's new career. Besides, if he's ever tight for cash Jonas will just charge 100k a pop to make guys into tops. Hell, you could probably get a student loan for it. @giveintothemusk - Thank you sir! Glad you enjoyed, hope you came ;) @Steve Shay - Thanks! I didn't make it too explicit, but I tried to write it so that Brady dumbed down a bit during the process. There's a reason Jonas used it on Brady, rather than making himself a top and having almost every other man on earth lust after him. Not as explicit as my usual twist. @jack - Hah, yes!! I was originally just gonna have it be a one night process, but I couldn't resist making Jonas wait for it. @Hypnoguy67 - Thank you sir. I was worried I skipped over too much of the worldbuilding, but clearly it's working for y'all. @anon - Thank ye' sir, you're very welcome!
Anonymous
12/16/20, 3:23 PM
Awesome work....thank you very much!!
screamingmoist
12/16/20, 2:33 PM
Happy to hear it's holding up!
12/16/20, 2:29 PM
I'm definitely in. I'm in New Hampshire on the VT border.