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12/15/20, 10:48 PM
Nicely done!
Anonymous
12/15/20, 10:47 PM
Wasn't expecting a m2f trans-formation in there, and picturing his/her actual pussy pretty much turned me off the rest of the story. You kept calling him a man, despite the anatomy and personality being 100% feminine (barring the prostate), so there was a weird mix of f2m and m2f vibes. If he had continued to think of himself as a masculine bottom, I might have gotten into a dude-with-a-pussy story. If he'd kept a nub of a penis, I could have accepted his description as a man. But the way it actually went made that all just kind of devolve into a confused mess, as far as my turn-ons were concerned. That went way beyond "cock shrink"...
12/15/20, 10:18 PM
Now it's starting to look good & hot. Can't wait for next Monday.
12/15/20, 10:17 PM
This is gonna sound stupid, but I didn't know you had recent stories written. This was well done! Love your hypnotist show stories with the guys being ensnared during the show! I hope you keep writing more stories in the future!
Lusty Stallion
12/15/20, 10:10 PM
Thanks for the ideas and encouragement.
12/15/20, 10:06 PM
There's one word that comes to mind immediately for me after finishing reading this, and that word is *fluids*. The way that you make use of and handle fluids -- sweat, pre-cum, cum, in this story is juuust phenomenal. I especially love the scene in Brian's office -- there's a lot of vivid descriptions of the physical stimuli -- scent, taste, sight, touch. Mmmm!
12/15/20, 9:35 PM
Excellent!
12/15/20, 9:09 PM
Loving this story! Really love what's happened to Tommy. So hot! Hope there's more soon.
Anonymous
12/15/20, 7:16 PM
great chapter....awesome work
Anonymous
12/15/20, 6:03 PM
a few idea's (if there is still time). A drone who introduces homophobic jocks into its hivemind. a cum bucket whose mission is to collect all the dna of men and uses it to enhance men when he has enough dna to improve the each mens potential but always turns them gay