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1/24/25, 1:31 PM
Wow! That was fucking hot! Can't wait for more... LLOYD

1/25/25, 3:22 AM
@[Lloyd311](/user/show/13481) Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad to hear you're liking it.
1/24/25, 1:23 AM
So, I start reading this series and, part-way through the first chapter, I reach the awful conclusion that I'd become emotionally invested in Colt and Rocky. Thank you for that (asshole!), now I can't just sit back and cheer on the bad guys! Ha ha,... No, I've enjoyed this series a lot so far! Such a cute couple and with just the right amount of bittersweet agony too! Thank you for such a wholesome read (sincerely, this time!). I'm looking forward to (and dreading) Part 4,...

1/24/25, 1:46 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Getting a comment from the person that made the story that gave me the idea to create this means a heck of a lot to me. Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to say something. It means more that you know. I'm glad you like the characters...I tried hard, lol. I was reading a book yesterday that the characters were so likable I threw the kindle when something happened to one of them. lol thanks again for taking the time to say something to me. Take care. -Jazzcat

1/24/25, 2:17 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) hopefully this means chap IV (or if it gets too long, chap V?) ends in some sort of victory? Of course not to dictate your story. You've been doing INCREDIBLY so far. I open GKS hoping to see an update to your story. And I'm ALWAYS surprised that you somehow already have another chapter up. Wherever your stamina is coming from, I'm jealous. With your vision, whatever you end up doing, we will love it. (But then again, I don't think my wallet is NOT financially ready to replace a laptop dropped from the height of twenty floors...)

1/24/25, 10:39 PM
@[yetanotheranonymous](/user/show/971894) You made my day with that comment...thank you so much. It makes all the time I put into this worth it!

1/25/25, 1:18 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) No, wait,... I think @yetanotheranonymous is on to something here! Your stamina and work-pace are almost super-human,.... _hmmm,..._ nah, maybe I'm just jealous too!

1/25/25, 2:01 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) lol. I’ve been writing the out line for six months. So. That’s part of it. I have another story I’ve been working on. But I don’t think it has enough mind control for here. I might try it and see later on but it’s in the early stages.

1/25/25, 2:02 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Also. I wish I had your ability to write mind control that dumbs down and control the way you can. Henry and Nick were my favorites. And you had me incredibly emotionally involved.
1/25/25, 1:10 AM
Aww, it got sweet at the end! That's part of what I love about your stories, Naedre. It can be hot as fuck and then there's a kindness to them at the end.
1/25/25, 1:05 AM
Ooh Daddy Jon is powerful. Cant wait for part two, so its gonna be a hot threesome. Hoping for Travis to be sandwiched between the two while fucking.
HypnoMutt
1/24/25, 10:22 AM
Maybe not canon, but definitely worth the trip. 🫡 an intimate duet, rising and falling like breathing, no explosions or crises, just getting enlightened on a road trip back to school under the stars. sweet. FWIW, I _love_ long chapters. the sax motif from Careless Whisper is in my mind's ear now..

1/24/25, 10:39 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) Thank you for your support....truly. I am flattered.
1/24/25, 3:43 AM
This chapter was so sweet. Every time I see Rocky and Colt together, I get all emotional and happy. I love romance. And even though this chapter is not canon, it gives a good idea of what might happen. This thing about Leviathan still using the weakened connection with Rocky to try to plant ideas and commands in his mind is worrying, but it also has great potential to make things even more interesting. Personally, I really like this aspect of the internal struggle between the person's will and the commands planted in their mind. I'm excited to know that we'll still get a bit of that in the next part. Well. Maybe it won't be as fun for Rocky, but at least now he has a handsome and brave boyfriend to fight alongside him. He's so lucky. I think everyone would like to have a Colt in their life. Even Velocity wants a Colt in his life, and the two have never even met (Stay away from Colt, hypnotized Velocity, he's already Rocky's. Unfortunately, you'll have to settle for the sociopathic villain for now). Who knows, maybe even Leviathan wants a Colt in his life (That would be kind of funny lol). Jokes aside, I hope everything is going well for you, Jazz. I can't wait to read the conclusion of this story, and to know what other stories you plan to write in the future.

1/24/25, 10:35 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Thank you...I will say it will be five parts at least. I'm done with part four and we ain't to the end! I'm just working on cleaning it up now. Thanks for the kind words, this hasn't gotten the likes or whatever it is I hoped, but the comments have been AMAZING and really make the effort worthwhile! Thank you again! I am very appreciative!
1/24/25, 8:13 PM
so great, can’t wait for part 2 !
1/24/25, 8:12 PM
this is great. you are going to give me a new kink at this rate
1/22/25, 6:48 PM
Dear Entranced Gay, AKA Bator, etc: Please, please--I hope you'll give us more chapters in this awesome story. Like 10 more. You're the best.

1/23/25, 12:46 AM
@[Bigmac](/user/show/920510) The next chapter was submitted for approval today :wink:

1/24/25, 6:42 PM
@[HypnoBator92](/user/show/171924) Thank you, you're great!
1/24/25, 5:29 PM
Another enjoyable chapter only marred (for probably me only) of the gratuitous mention of everyone's favorite, (but mine) Sammy Sue. haha