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12/14/20, 5:15 PM
Great story. However, I had a problem with a Muslim character named "Xavier"!
kuro
12/14/20, 2:30 PM
Having something like F9 whisper in one's ear so sweetly while the rest of the earth goes a little strange seems like one of the sweetest forms of apocalypse. I liked the blending of genres that occurs in the interrogation room - *especially* the wallet aspect, which wraps up that open question so neatly - along with, well, every other aspect of this. Super job!
12/14/20, 2:28 PM
Great perverted story. I loved it
kuro
12/14/20, 2:27 PM
Look, we all know Nu's a fantastic writer, right? But this one is just a cut above the rest. The seamless, *extremely obvious* memory/reality change that's nevertheless totally undetectable to our protagonist, the outside interference that gets patched over in the most hilarious fashion possible... revisiting this story is a joy! I can't help but theorise about a sequel (what happens when the time runs out? Does our plucky protagonist suspect Jake of somehow managing a nefarious switcheroo, resulting in a Heist Into Hell?), but this stands on its own as a great work. Stellar!
kuro
12/14/20, 2:21 PM
I often revisit this story - it's one of my favourite TF fics ever written. The ripple effect changes, the scrambling oblivious mental justifications - it's all *chef's kiss* perfect. I admit I'm not a huge fan of the 'r' word, but it's being told from the perspective of a character who's a dickhead, so - fair enough! The BEEP BEEP modifications have certainly informed some of my own writing, too! Really, this story is just a great job all 'round. Fantastic work.
Anonymous
12/14/20, 1:59 PM
I love it, thank you!
Anonymous
12/14/20, 1:50 PM
Well this was *incredibly* hot... As always your writing is really vivid, playful at the right moments and always clear and filled with... I dunno, momentum, I guess? But this story, beyond checking all my personal boxes in terms of kink, took the premise in such a fun direction! "What if hung but *too much*: the curse" is a trope I've read before, but your spin on it is particularly hot and also just tongue-in-cheek in a lovely way. The stern way the coach keeps calling him by his last name and scolding him for profanity, all the while balls deep in his ass? Brilliantly hot and hilarious. And then we enter this series of wonderful well paced entrances, each character reacting with alarm before deciding that *of course* fucking the poor jock is the only solution... And we get a happy ending!! Just, very charming and enjoyable all the way through... One of my favorite GSS stories I've read recently!
12/14/20, 1:45 PM
That's really hot well done, Muslim's stories here are too rare while it's so exciting to make them transgress their religious rules. -> Actually, I agree with comments below Xavier is really not an appropriate name for a Muslim character
12/14/20, 1:03 PM
What I like about this chapter is we finally get a little -- is it mind control? -- bit of Charlie rationalizing his changing behavior and feelings. Took him long enough...
12/14/20, 12:42 PM
*Oof,* this story hits none of my specific kinks but the way you wrote it was *hot.* Like, I'm not usually one for incest, dialogue-driven stories, or kind of ominous/bad endings but all three were pulled off in that rare way where it threads the needle between unsettling and sexy, which is pretty perfect given the theme! Some of the imagery — like the boogeyman watching with "moon-bright eyes" and the narrative voice you use for the bedtime story in general — is also just lovely... the twist at the ending wasn't unexpected per se, but it was executed *very* well, especially with dialogue as your only medium. Overall, really hot and really well written even if not really my "thing"!