Recent Comments

12/15/20, 3:10 AM
Nice job for your first story and in a second language to you. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
12/15/20, 3:08 AM
Great starting point. I can't wait for more chapters. Also your English is pretty good.
Dec 14, 2020
12/14/20, 11:38 PM
Great story. Wonderful build up with the friends falling under one by one. You have unfortunately some distracting spelling mistakes.
12/14/20, 11:01 PM
Oh yes. Lovely. :-)
12/14/20, 9:50 PM
More... pls!
12/14/20, 8:43 PM
@FeedYourHead - Glad you liked the interpretation! @AClosetBear - You're welcome. I struggle with it too sometimes, and especially around sex and 'gay culture' areas. You're not alone.
Anonymous
12/14/20, 6:23 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone, I appreciate the love! It's so amazing how great the audience is on this site. @ Hypnothrill; I didn't initially plan to write a sequel for this story since I wasn't sure what the reception for this would be like, but its most DEFINITELY a possibility. I can see two follow up story ideas for this installment for sure. @ Frara; I agree that there aren't many Muslim stories here and I'm glad I wrote one. I tried to do as much research as I can so that I can portray the religion as well as I could. I hope I did a good job. @BankStreet; thanks for the compliment, but may I ask why you have a problem with the name Xavier? I did my best to do the research and pick the most authentic Persian names I could and 'Xavier' is definitely a legit name. Is it the meaning of the name that you have issues with? Apparently Xavier means 'bright' or 'new house' in Arabic and I don't see why that would be a problem.
12/14/20, 6:16 PM
honestly, i needed to read This. at least the first part. i struggle with my sexuality and my Christian up bringing. thank you for writing this.
12/14/20, 6:15 PM
I enjoyed very much and would love to hear about some college exploits
12/14/20, 5:15 PM
Great story. However, I had a problem with a Muslim character named "Xavier"!