@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Honestly with Larry's comment and Yousef's resigned sadness I think it's pretty telling that is Al, as well as with who he's with- officers. It's also interesting to see how Yousef and Larry react to that. Larry sees no issue with that because well for him...Al was an threat who was weirdly obsessed with him. Yousef on the other hand lost Frank to that same same spell so he isn't as okay with what happened, though he has come to accept it had to be done to save them all. Problem is, Yousef is probably about to start having more trouble with his other relationships outside the pack...some of those tags do not bode well if what I think is going to happen will happen. As for Yousef, looking at Mahmood's confession to Ray...we really do see the other side of what happens when weres leave behind their families and it's realistically not pretty- though Tom also shows us the other side of that as well. Couple that with the fact that Yousef's family is naturally tight knit due to the struggles they faced, and it has a much more somber and dreadful affect overall. Yousef I'm afraid has badly miscalculated in his attempts to keep things secret- and is about to pay a terrible price I fear. Then again, while he may not have been subject to being a sacrifice- Yousef's curse seems to be that those around him wind up sacrificed. Seth is no longer around, Frank is now a dog, his faith is being scrutinized by some (though others are okay with it- as was the wolf king and his pack during his court session to a degree so it doesn't seem that much of an issue), Mahmood might wind up in the one thing Yousef wanted to keep his father away from, and his being a seer could get him involved in the deadly games of werewolf politics. If alphas can be killed by their own packs in coups- who is to say of what will befall seers? The wolf king declared Yousef protected, but are seers seen as valuable even without that protection inherently, or is Yosuef protected as long as the Wolf King is still in power?

the transfiguration of the leaded glass saints. score one for ecumenical outreach! when the Pack encountered the German Shepherd at the hockey game, I thought for a minute that Frank had a side gig! this story is tight as a drum, all the elements are moving like clockwork. flawless chapter, the canid highlight of this mutt's week. awoo!

Amazing! This was just so hot. Love Big Ben getting what he deserves. Hope there's more to come...LLOYD

Wow! That was fucking hot! Can't wait for more... LLOYD

So, I start reading this series and, part-way through the first chapter, I reach the awful conclusion that I'd become emotionally invested in Colt and Rocky. Thank you for that (asshole!), now I can't just sit back and cheer on the bad guys! Ha ha,... No, I've enjoyed this series a lot so far! Such a cute couple and with just the right amount of bittersweet agony too! Thank you for such a wholesome read (sincerely, this time!). I'm looking forward to (and dreading) Part 4,...

Aww, it got sweet at the end! That's part of what I love about your stories, Naedre. It can be hot as fuck and then there's a kindness to them at the end.

Ooh Daddy Jon is powerful. Cant wait for part two, so its gonna be a hot threesome. Hoping for Travis to be sandwiched between the two while fucking.

Maybe not canon, but definitely worth the trip. 🫡 an intimate duet, rising and falling like breathing, no explosions or crises, just getting enlightened on a road trip back to school under the stars. sweet. FWIW, I _love_ long chapters. the sax motif from Careless Whisper is in my mind's ear now..

This chapter was so sweet. Every time I see Rocky and Colt together, I get all emotional and happy. I love romance. And even though this chapter is not canon, it gives a good idea of what might happen. This thing about Leviathan still using the weakened connection with Rocky to try to plant ideas and commands in his mind is worrying, but it also has great potential to make things even more interesting. Personally, I really like this aspect of the internal struggle between the person's will and the commands planted in their mind. I'm excited to know that we'll still get a bit of that in the next part. Well. Maybe it won't be as fun for Rocky, but at least now he has a handsome and brave boyfriend to fight alongside him. He's so lucky. I think everyone would like to have a Colt in their life. Even Velocity wants a Colt in his life, and the two have never even met (Stay away from Colt, hypnotized Velocity, he's already Rocky's. Unfortunately, you'll have to settle for the sociopathic villain for now). Who knows, maybe even Leviathan wants a Colt in his life (That would be kind of funny lol). Jokes aside, I hope everything is going well for you, Jazz. I can't wait to read the conclusion of this story, and to know what other stories you plan to write in the future.

so great, can’t wait for part 2 !