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12/14/20, 1:45 PM
That's really hot well done, Muslim's stories here are too rare while it's so exciting to make them transgress their religious rules. -> Actually, I agree with comments below Xavier is really not an appropriate name for a Muslim character
12/14/20, 1:03 PM
What I like about this chapter is we finally get a little -- is it mind control? -- bit of Charlie rationalizing his changing behavior and feelings. Took him long enough...
12/14/20, 12:42 PM
*Oof,* this story hits none of my specific kinks but the way you wrote it was *hot.* Like, I'm not usually one for incest, dialogue-driven stories, or kind of ominous/bad endings but all three were pulled off in that rare way where it threads the needle between unsettling and sexy, which is pretty perfect given the theme! Some of the imagery — like the boogeyman watching with "moon-bright eyes" and the narrative voice you use for the bedtime story in general — is also just lovely... the twist at the ending wasn't unexpected per se, but it was executed *very* well, especially with dialogue as your only medium. Overall, really hot and really well written even if not really my "thing"!
Anonymous
12/14/20, 11:47 AM
Ohhhhhh, this was *hot...* First off, this line really tickled me: > The bell jingled, announcing the arrival of a twink. Just... what an opening, if I was more of a twink I'd say "me when I enter a room." But in all seriousness, this was very well done! You had a lovely variety of changes, and the disembodied voice + characters treating all the magical antics as nothing too out of the ordinary was very well executed imo! My favorite parts of this story were the two tops practically touching cocks through Henry, cause... *hot,* and Henry in general turning into this cocky, twinky, *needy* little bottom who pouted any time the chair stopped fucking him. It was hot and just tongue in cheek enough to be fun to read in both a sexy and non-sexy way!
Anonymous
12/14/20, 11:18 AM
*Ugh,* this was *extremely* well done!! From the first paragraph it's really clear you have a knack for prose, and your visual descriptions were vivid and lovely. I also particularly liked the balance you struck between foreshadowing and a kind of oblivious narrator? The clues you dropped — about the fruit, about "alternatives" etc — were all clear enough to be fun and almost tongue in cheek, but not so on the nose that it was weird your protag didn't catch on. But including those clues made it *all* hot, not just the explicitly sexual stuff... the little hints about the taste of the fruit and the fruit blossoms in the water, the way all the guys seemed to think the fruit tasted better and better each day, in context that all became like... sexy suspense. The end was also *extremely hot* lmao, so, there's that... I'm not even really into cum addiction as a concept but the way you wrote it made me consider searching the rest of the tag ~ Pretty fantastic overall!
12/14/20, 11:16 AM
I loved this one! I'd welcome a sequel in which we see the family adjusting to their new lives (and maybe recruiting some new subjects for Viktoras).
12/14/20, 9:50 AM
more please !
12/14/20, 8:09 AM
Keep going,, i am also the one who like this fetish,, i really enjoy your story.
12/14/20, 5:25 AM
What a lovely story. I like this interpretation of God. :D Not just because They're (I use plural pronouns when referring to the Powers, because do you REALLY think a stupid binary can define them? :p For real...) hot, but because They're loving and gentle and wise, too. No point in a God that wants us to hate ourselves. :)
Zac
12/14/20, 2:20 AM
*Damn,* dude! That was super-hot! I love stories where dudes just lose control of themselves and give in to those urges and you write some *hot* sex!