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12/13/20, 2:35 PM
What a powerful transformation. Where is that camp?
Anonymous
12/13/20, 1:23 PM
Okay.... now isn't THIS God WAY preferable to the Xian God (or, at least, the Catholic God)? And yet, we still beat ourselves up thinking some misogynistic, homophobic God is the "real" one... I'm super-glad to see our chat found its way into fiction (autobiographical fiction, one hopes) and I'm ready to have another about the body being the physical manifestation of the soul. (We'll get stoned first.) One thing you might want to consider as an edit: for "God," capitalize the "He's" and "Hims" -- stylistically it will be more in tune with biblical stuff AND it will give subtle prominence to the character. I really enjoyed this.
Anonymous
12/13/20, 12:02 PM
Absolutely Spectacular Thanks!!!
12/13/20, 9:55 AM
You really have to stop writing perfect stories. They're clogging up my favorites list. i grew up Jewish so this wasn't a problem i had personally, but someday some kid, or even an adult, is going to find this story and they're going to cry, just like Jason did. Great job.
12/13/20, 9:14 AM
And I thought god was a DJ :( Now there’s gonna be drama in the toxic jesus fandom. All jokes aside, fun story!
boi98229
12/13/20, 6:19 AM
i love a story with lots of context and character development. For me it makes the sex even hotter. What more can i say except that i would love to go to Camp Wild Rush with someone like the transformed Jason!! i can hardly wait!
12/13/20, 5:16 AM
Ohhh, @martin ! Thank you for such lovely words. You have really brightened my day! I especially appreciate a comment on this part, since I think it originally got fewer views than the others due to some technical issues with the predecessor sites. Also the comments that I've seen have been that people think part 3 is generally the hottest part of the series so far, so I am very gratified you are impressed with the intensity of the sexual exploration in this part!
12/13/20, 1:21 AM
I saw the Cycle One stories come up in "latest stories." I loved the original and saw that you wrote this latest one so I had to dig in. I thought you were taking another story like Pollination and writing your version of it. As I was reading this, I kept thinking, "gym, old man, firemen, etc it has everything in the original and I'm not catching any variations. What is Absman up to?" Then I got down to the bottom and saw that I had already rated it. I didn't even notice the title was faded in the list of stories indicating that I already read it. Funny story I thought for what it's worth. My favorite part of this story both the first time and this time: let's take a case back to the firehouse. Onward to the new story now....
Beast
12/13/20, 12:10 AM
I love this story. I hope that you can keep going or start a series about Valentine. I wanted Eli and Jake to hookup so bad.
Jimmy M
12/12/20, 11:23 PM
Love it so far, hope you will continue, please