Recent Comments

12/13/20, 1:21 AM
I saw the Cycle One stories come up in "latest stories." I loved the original and saw that you wrote this latest one so I had to dig in. I thought you were taking another story like Pollination and writing your version of it. As I was reading this, I kept thinking, "gym, old man, firemen, etc it has everything in the original and I'm not catching any variations. What is Absman up to?" Then I got down to the bottom and saw that I had already rated it. I didn't even notice the title was faded in the list of stories indicating that I already read it. Funny story I thought for what it's worth. My favorite part of this story both the first time and this time: let's take a case back to the firehouse. Onward to the new story now....
Beast
12/13/20, 12:10 AM
I love this story. I hope that you can keep going or start a series about Valentine. I wanted Eli and Jake to hookup so bad.
Jimmy M
12/12/20, 11:23 PM
Love it so far, hope you will continue, please
Martin
12/12/20, 11:16 PM
This is so intense! That fucking scene must be one of the hottest and intense I've ever read. How could I have missed this story for so long?!
12/12/20, 7:48 PM
I like where this is going, can't wait for the next installment.
EntrancedGay92
12/12/20, 7:47 PM
I think your choice to start with Heather being brainwashed by the Doctor first instead of Will was a unique twist on the usual straight to gay plots. But, I also felt both her and Mary appear too much in the plot. I found myself skipping a lot of the story because, frankly, a woman being brainwashed is of no interest to me. I like the direction you are going with the conversion of Will, but it seemed to come abruptly. I imagine the Doctor as this cocky villain who would go out his way to explain to his male victims what he has up his sleeve. It is okay to pull the reader along for a bit; it adds tensions. But, I personally find writing hypnosis scenes to be a challenge; despite having gone under for the last seven years. I'm looking forward to seeing what is on the horizon.
12/12/20, 7:37 PM
Loved this story. Seriously pushes just about all of my buttons and as always, very well written.
Anonymous
12/12/20, 6:43 PM
I really like it. Please, continue with more sex submission.
12/12/20, 6:01 PM
Really well written!
12/12/20, 5:05 PM
Dude, I'm kinda of worried about you. Please give us a shout out so we know you didn't get Covid or something haha. Please come back soon, I'm so anxious for the next chapter!