Another enjoyable chapter only marred (for probably me only) of the gratuitous mention of everyone's favorite, (but mine) Sammy Sue. haha

Why did his name keep changing from Nate to Lucas?

I had an earlier comment on this story, but deleted it because it was way too harsh (I wrote it while in a horrible mood). I’m going to try to voice my concern WITHOUT being a massive jerk. To me, there’s a heavy irony/sad humor to this story, because it so perfectly represents the dangers and struggles of artists and AI: it features a member of a community struggling with, and ultimately succumbing to, the temptation to use a quick fix that produces instant results, but ultimately reduces the affected “product” (be it a person or a story) into a mass-produced object that looks beautiful/ideal, yet has no substance or depth. More and more people give in thanks to relentless pressure, and the tale ends with the idea that no one is safe. But the irony is that the story *was generated by AI.* It’s a dark commentary on the dangers of artificial intelligence written by artificial intelligence. And even if that is the point, it’s the same issue as buying products from a troublesome company “ironically”—your money is still going to them, just as the use of AI is still damaging to the environment regardless of how it’s used. Like Thom said, I am deeply opposed to AI—because even when it’s fed material by one specific and consenting artist (as opposed to scraping the art of countless artists without credit), the environmental damage is ENORMOUS. After the fires in Los Angeles and with other climate disasters becoming commonplace, I can’t stop thinking about how much water and land the computer serves that host AI use. How much water will thirteen stories take? We the audience bear some of the blame, too—by constantly pressuring artists to produce more, we urge them to use AI as a solution. You’re one of my favorite authors, Hypnothrill, and I’ve been reading your stories for nearly a decade now. I can’t speak for anyone else, but as for myself, I’d rather wait another year for a story that YOU write as opposed to your using AI to create, well, clones. Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Thank you for reading them.

When will Zeus bottom? I always like when the mighty top falls in love with anal/prostate orgasms. For instance the Jason and Brock getting Zeus to try a thong on and all three bottoms makes the BBC Squirt. Would be a nice twist. Unlike the rest, Zeus could find out the thongs are the trick and takes his control back after taking it off. Not telling them anything. Zeus and Hiro wearing Thongs, sheer business shocks with sock garters would be hot. Great stories

So Awesome Mister, Thanks!!

Jack, you always make us want more! Good thing Johnny Football has so much to give. You are a master of your craft.

I will personally never be a fan of ai-created and/or ai-assisted stories, but regardless, it is nice to see you back in this space despite your busy life, Mr. Hypnothrill ☺️ I hope you'll find the time and place in the future to write again, since your stories have always been some of my favourites.

sitting here naked in the dark in the wee hours, making feral huff noises as i'm keeping pace with the story, faster and harder, ending up feeling rode as hard as a jack parker bottom, shaking my head in wonder yet again at the marvel you just laid on us. what a gift. thank you.

Damn, this is like my new go to story! I've read it like 10 times now 🔥 🔥 🔥

Not at all the resolution I was expecting. Great chapter!