Recent Comments

JRL
12/10/20, 7:43 PM
my god this is an amazingly hot story so far!!!! can't wait for more. thank you!!!
12/10/20, 7:26 PM
> Who cares if you end up a whore. With training like that, I’d be hella good at it. > I never did get to the eating ass training video...
12/10/20, 7:07 PM
absolutely love it. love the idea that they might switch body types and perhaps even some personality treats. seriously can't wait to see how they turn out.
12/10/20, 6:17 PM
Dude, that was excellent. I meant to spend last night writing, but instead I got my hand around my horn and edged to this for as long as I could manage. Blew my load during his scene where he sucked a dick for the "first time". I wish I had coach on my phone. Who cares if you end up a whore. With training like that, I'd be hella good at it.
12/10/20, 5:03 PM
I'm OBSESSED with this story...really inspiring me to write more!
giveintothemusk
12/10/20, 5:02 PM
Fan-fucking-tastic writing . Can't wait for more.
12/10/20, 5:01 PM
This is FANTASTIC so far!! Cant wait for more!
12/10/20, 4:58 PM
I'm not trying to sexualize it, but the reason EVERY SINGLE MAN owns a motorcycle is to feel the vibrating throb of the engine between his legs.
Anonymous
12/10/20, 4:56 PM
> I actually was so into the story that the bathtub ran over and flooded two rooms! It’s all your fault!!!!!! ;-) > Can I use that as a blurb for my next collection?
12/10/20, 4:53 PM
Love it! I don't think the inner turmoil is necessary. I tried a similar approach to my series (which I published here in part, before the shitstorm on "Pedophilia" broke out) Pure Muscle Mass, where a teenager lives in a facility and is turned into a drooling muscle beast. It's a question of who your audience is and what you're intending. If it's just a smut story, the turmoil can distract from the sexy, hot scenes of transforming into a muscle beast. Not every story needs to be a Hallmark holiday special. I actually was so into the story that the bathtub ran over and flooded two rooms! It's all your fault!!!!!! ;-)