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boi98229
12/10/20, 5:53 AM
I love the super-techie (almost magic!) toys you thought up. This is the kind of imagination i wish for every Dom, along with the fun times experimenting and the appreciative subs to help with the test runs. i did find that with everything going on (so much action) the story flashed by pretty quick with some sense of suspense, a good intellectual sense of the toys and their potential use, but rather lacking (for my typical taste at least) in erotic tension. i missed (what i typically most enjoy in a BDSM D/s story) is the slow process of seduction and shift in control. It felt a little like a Batman-Joker battle in Willie Wonka's Chocolate Factory -- a fun read! Thanks so much for sharing with us.
boi98229
12/10/20, 5:18 AM
i tend to over-think things sometimes, and right now i am really worried about what happens to Charlie if he expands while bottled up in a glass jar. That can't be good!
12/10/20, 4:41 AM
Tysm Evan! Thank you for reading!
Evan
12/10/20, 3:58 AM
Great series! Thank you for writing!
screamingmoist
12/9/20, 11:52 PM
Thank you so much!
12/9/20, 11:15 PM
will we see next part soon?
Lusty Stallion
12/9/20, 10:59 PM
Great srory man. Such detail such power. Thanks for the time you put intk crating it
12/9/20, 10:47 PM
A great read. I bought the book.
12/9/20, 8:59 PM
Just when I thought the series couldn't get any better you went ahead and done it! I love the approach you used to "lock" Dan into being Alex's Daddy
12/9/20, 8:45 PM
How have I missed this story after all these years