Recent Comments

12/10/20, 10:54 AM
thanks GM for the chapter. I don't mind if they are long. it's the epic story line that makes it a real fantasy erotic read. love to see where your heading with this. but will wait for each chapter to come out. easily my favourite story here. thank you for sharing your writing. PS voting for Hunter. with a red signet ring or wrist cuff. Relzad.
12/10/20, 10:25 AM
ill take a job if they are hireing!
slavemor
12/10/20, 8:43 AM
fucking brilliant! good wanks, joining in
boi98229
12/10/20, 5:53 AM
I love the super-techie (almost magic!) toys you thought up. This is the kind of imagination i wish for every Dom, along with the fun times experimenting and the appreciative subs to help with the test runs. i did find that with everything going on (so much action) the story flashed by pretty quick with some sense of suspense, a good intellectual sense of the toys and their potential use, but rather lacking (for my typical taste at least) in erotic tension. i missed (what i typically most enjoy in a BDSM D/s story) is the slow process of seduction and shift in control. It felt a little like a Batman-Joker battle in Willie Wonka's Chocolate Factory -- a fun read! Thanks so much for sharing with us.
boi98229
12/10/20, 5:18 AM
i tend to over-think things sometimes, and right now i am really worried about what happens to Charlie if he expands while bottled up in a glass jar. That can't be good!
12/10/20, 4:41 AM
Tysm Evan! Thank you for reading!
Evan
12/10/20, 3:58 AM
Great series! Thank you for writing!
screamingmoist
12/9/20, 11:52 PM
Thank you so much!
12/9/20, 11:15 PM
will we see next part soon?
Lusty Stallion
12/9/20, 10:59 PM
Great srory man. Such detail such power. Thanks for the time you put intk crating it