Recent Comments

12/9/20, 12:59 PM
Well it might not be for hypnothrill but it s one of my favorite one from you. Hell that the type of story i would request if you were on Patreon.
12/9/20, 11:15 AM
Well, it's an awfully long story. And I've loved your stuff so much in the past, I felt like I owed you a thorough review. I think you've just been exploring slightly different territory in your recent works. Speaking writer to writer, I appreciate that kind of growth and willingness to experiment. But speaking as a reader, the new stuff just isn't as simpatico with my own erotic fantasies.
12/9/20, 10:46 AM
> But personally, I just found it mildly arousing, and it didn’t get me off. > That was an awfully long review for mildly arousing and didn't get you off. Thats two in a row you haven't liked. Bummer.
12/9/20, 10:43 AM
So great! I love this story!!!
12/9/20, 10:23 AM
写的真的是太棒了,迫不及待的想看后续!请问未来能看到更多介绍后文? 😍
12/9/20, 9:13 AM
This was really good. Hope it will be continued!
Anonymous
12/9/20, 7:40 AM
我非常喜欢
12/9/20, 5:15 AM
Although I liked the twist at the end, the story itself just wasn't dark enough for my tastes. I think it's fine that we don't see much resistance from Dom, who signed up for this. But to me, the story would be a lot hotter if we saw some resistance from one of the supporting pornstar characters--or even just saw them do something uncanny like sing Paragon's praises in a way that sounds scripted, or suddenly change personalities in response to a director's verbal commands. I think the story was well-written, and I'm happy to see that other people are loving it and giving you the praise you deserve. But personally, I just found it mildly arousing, and it didn't get me off.
12/9/20, 3:21 AM
very hot so glad u posted it this has been my all time fav long story ever. Always glad to see Bob and Pablo togther
Oct 3, 2010
12/9/20, 1:58 AM
This is early BLUFMAN, and his work only got better with time. Clearly one of the more original writers on this site.