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12/8/20, 7:43 PM
> Quick question: is “Austin” a self-insert? > No -- a reference to the stupidly beautiful Austin Wolf, my recent favorite.
Anonymous
12/8/20, 7:19 PM
excellent...wonderful...terrific...so well done !!!
12/8/20, 7:12 PM
Erratic101 - <3 tomozco - Dont you worry, for you, I can wait forever(?) <3 And I am more of a cop guy rather than firefighters, so no problem there :P But if I may, I would like if you could add more spotlight to older men rather than young ones this time. But this is, again, a personal taste, you do you, you are amazing <3
12/8/20, 6:56 PM
As per usual, Abs, a masterpiece. It's long, but it's the good kind of long that keeps stringing you along, and you don't mind the length. The use of 2nd-person perspective in the hypno scenes was really creative, I don't think I've seen the perspective flip back and forth like that before. The progression from what was probably a pure fantasy scene, to maybe a live show, to a shoot under the influence of hypnosis, was well executed. And the little stinger at the end- that the company uses hypnosis to not only train its stable of performers, but also brainwash them into becoming prostitutes- was such a hot touch, almost makes me want a sequel! And yes, the sex scenes were phenomenal. You have a great talent for doing blow-by-blows that don't dissolve into the florid mire of one Fennimore-Cooper. Quick question: is "Austin" a self-insert?
12/8/20, 6:23 PM
I thought you did a good job with the changes; they were subtle, and quite believable. 🙂
12/8/20, 6:03 PM
Kyle - Thanks so much for your support and feedback! ;) Udems - Haha...and since you asked, yes, as I might have hinted to before, the police would be coming up. But I haven't started on it yet, so please bear with me and stay tuned! No plans for firefighters at this time though.
12/8/20, 5:36 PM
Brilliant and so very, very hot.
12/8/20, 4:06 PM
> Now that my friend, was a thing of beauty. > I just wanted to remind everybody that I could write a sex scene. > I so need to get writing again here. > I couldn't agree with this more.
12/8/20, 3:59 PM
Now that my friend, was a thing of beauty. Thanks Absman as always. I so need to get writing again here.
Elm
12/8/20, 2:31 PM
You really are one of the best! cant wait to see more of you here :)