Recent Comments

12/9/20, 5:15 AM
Although I liked the twist at the end, the story itself just wasn't dark enough for my tastes. I think it's fine that we don't see much resistance from Dom, who signed up for this. But to me, the story would be a lot hotter if we saw some resistance from one of the supporting pornstar characters--or even just saw them do something uncanny like sing Paragon's praises in a way that sounds scripted, or suddenly change personalities in response to a director's verbal commands. I think the story was well-written, and I'm happy to see that other people are loving it and giving you the praise you deserve. But personally, I just found it mildly arousing, and it didn't get me off.
12/9/20, 3:21 AM
very hot so glad u posted it this has been my all time fav long story ever. Always glad to see Bob and Pablo togther
Oct 3, 2010
12/9/20, 1:58 AM
This is early BLUFMAN, and his work only got better with time. Clearly one of the more original writers on this site.
12/8/20, 11:42 PM
Where can i sign up?
12/8/20, 11:30 PM
While stories where the victim is aware he is being brainwashed but ultimately succumbs are always hot, there's also something very delicious and sexy in the irony of the victim being led by his nose, none the wiser, while we know exactly what's happening to him.
12/8/20, 10:45 PM
> Loved the clueless progression as the temperature rises in and out of the story > This was my greatest concern in the story -- that Dom never realizes anything's happening to him. There's no moral struggle, or no lost personality, he's simply clueless. I didn't know if it would play well or if everybody would be, like, "There's no inner turmoil!"
12/8/20, 10:42 PM
Fantastic job! Loved the clueless progression as the temperature rises in and out of the story, and a great sexy payoff.
Anonymous
12/8/20, 9:58 PM
Real good.
12/8/20, 9:18 PM
This was an awesome story. It had great sensory imagery, a good progression, and a mix of very hot sex scenes. another
12/8/20, 8:41 PM
So fucking hot!!