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12/8/20, 8:41 PM
So fucking hot!!
12/8/20, 8:22 PM
Not American or British. Still found it natural-sounding. But what happened to Kurt? I was expecting him to be revealed as the culprit when Mark heard the witch's voice or to save him thanks to his insomnias but he never reappears!
Nurseb
12/8/20, 7:52 PM
Absman420 this is amazing. Please give us more of this!! would love to see who the mastermind behind the studio is. Thank you for sharing this delicious fantasy with us.
12/8/20, 7:45 PM
That was honestly my first instinct, but then after reading, I remembered your "Coach Austin" moniker. Figured there was no harm in asking for clarification.
12/8/20, 7:43 PM
> Quick question: is “Austin” a self-insert? > No -- a reference to the stupidly beautiful Austin Wolf, my recent favorite.
Anonymous
12/8/20, 7:19 PM
excellent...wonderful...terrific...so well done !!!
12/8/20, 7:12 PM
Erratic101 - <3 tomozco - Dont you worry, for you, I can wait forever(?) <3 And I am more of a cop guy rather than firefighters, so no problem there :P But if I may, I would like if you could add more spotlight to older men rather than young ones this time. But this is, again, a personal taste, you do you, you are amazing <3
12/8/20, 6:56 PM
As per usual, Abs, a masterpiece. It's long, but it's the good kind of long that keeps stringing you along, and you don't mind the length. The use of 2nd-person perspective in the hypno scenes was really creative, I don't think I've seen the perspective flip back and forth like that before. The progression from what was probably a pure fantasy scene, to maybe a live show, to a shoot under the influence of hypnosis, was well executed. And the little stinger at the end- that the company uses hypnosis to not only train its stable of performers, but also brainwash them into becoming prostitutes- was such a hot touch, almost makes me want a sequel! And yes, the sex scenes were phenomenal. You have a great talent for doing blow-by-blows that don't dissolve into the florid mire of one Fennimore-Cooper. Quick question: is "Austin" a self-insert?
12/8/20, 6:23 PM
I thought you did a good job with the changes; they were subtle, and quite believable. 🙂
12/8/20, 6:03 PM
Kyle - Thanks so much for your support and feedback! ;) Udems - Haha...and since you asked, yes, as I might have hinted to before, the police would be coming up. But I haven't started on it yet, so please bear with me and stay tuned! No plans for firefighters at this time though.