Recent Comments

Zef
12/8/20, 6:04 AM
So good!! I would really really love to have a weighing scene to see exactly how much he's gained. Really love the descriptions so far!
12/8/20, 5:30 AM
I'm anxiously checking up on this everyday to see if the new chapter is already up, lol. Please update soon!
ingear
12/8/20, 4:19 AM
Hypno stonerbation brainwash dong bonging! It's like my bate chats in a story. Wait... have we bate chatted?! =P
12/8/20, 3:15 AM
Such an incredibly hot chapter! I love the imagery used during the hypnotic induction.
12/8/20, 2:57 AM
This was a very awesome and solid chapter! The soccer and baseball team bonding session was so very hot and I LOVED the signature piss drinking. I'm so glad you went back to your roots. I also love the twist with Omar and Zaid at the end. Very fitting fate for the father and son. Now I'm wondering as well. What's next? Well personally, I hope we come back to the Stanton family again. I kinda miss them!
Anonymous
12/8/20, 2:28 AM
unique topic. Definitely an attention grabber. Main character comes across as authentic and authoritative. Good mix. Wish my cowboy clothes were cursed and subjected to control and domination. Hot story.
12/8/20, 12:27 AM
i need to have the rest please
Lusty Stallion
12/7/20, 11:57 PM
great job man! loved it
Dec 6, 2020
Lakritz24
12/7/20, 9:38 PM
Well, its like i am feeling right from about some weeks. But there is no one neare, or thathing me or i can see. Nice, but strange.
12/7/20, 9:10 PM
Shows lots of promise and an interesting idea. I think however that it suffers from the same problem I have when writing stories...moving too fast, getting to the 'good' stuff 'now' instead of letting things build. That being said...it was an enjoyable read and look forward to more.