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12/5/20, 10:25 AM
I LOVE THIS!!! can't wait to read more and to expand. love the idea of potions
12/5/20, 9:08 AM
Very hot story! Glad to see you continuing this one!
Anonymous
12/5/20, 7:16 AM
Please write more! This is one of the hottest things I've read
Anonymous
12/5/20, 7:06 AM
This story is amazing. I think should reconsider about introducing the coach and the policeman to business , that idea of ​​adding them is very hot, and it would also be unbelievable to add this new subject to the group
12/5/20, 6:26 AM
Hope there is more to this. It was very hotttt
12/5/20, 5:39 AM
I definitely enjoyed this, and it was hot. The one thing I'd suggest for the future is spend a bit more time with the story, describe a bit more and take some time.
12/5/20, 4:45 AM
I really enjoy your nerdification stories. I hope you write more.
12/5/20, 4:40 AM
i picked up later the 111 emergency number so i def knew you were NZ. Great to see awesome writing talent from here. I will find yur tumblrs also. Keep it up . CHCH here btw.
hypnosub
12/5/20, 4:36 AM
this is SUCH a phenomenal way to end the story! i've read your stories on tumblr and this one by far has the most satisfying and well written, it perfectly captures all of the fun times of being little bit also packs quite the emotional punch. and the on/off switch was a nice touch - i'd love to see you explore that concept in other stories in the future!
12/5/20, 4:24 AM
@Dayle I'm in New Zealand and I did wonder if anyone would guess it from the Countdown reference (I believe they're all called Woolworths in Australia). Also it's one of the only countries where bare feet in public are normal and acceptable. If you like my story have a look at my tumblr, which is under my pen name. I have heaps more stories there.