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12/5/20, 4:40 AM
i picked up later the 111 emergency number so i def knew you were NZ. Great to see awesome writing talent from here. I will find yur tumblrs also. Keep it up . CHCH here btw.
hypnosub
12/5/20, 4:36 AM
this is SUCH a phenomenal way to end the story! i've read your stories on tumblr and this one by far has the most satisfying and well written, it perfectly captures all of the fun times of being little bit also packs quite the emotional punch. and the on/off switch was a nice touch - i'd love to see you explore that concept in other stories in the future!
12/5/20, 4:24 AM
@Dayle I'm in New Zealand and I did wonder if anyone would guess it from the Countdown reference (I believe they're all called Woolworths in Australia). Also it's one of the only countries where bare feet in public are normal and acceptable. If you like my story have a look at my tumblr, which is under my pen name. I have heaps more stories there.
bikerbro
12/5/20, 2:26 AM
OK, Mitchel's transformation was ridiculously hot, and the forced method of downing the beer was a nice touch. Really enjoying this AI concept, haven't seen it employed before but it's something I'll be looking into.
12/5/20, 12:55 AM
Truly amazing story. Loved every word of it. i think we all admit we have thought about what would our lives be like if we just escaped the stresses and worries of adulthood. now Mindwiper are u in Australia or New Zealand? because the Countdown supermarket reference was noticed. Hope to see more of your work in the coming months. Keep it up.
12/5/20, 12:36 AM
great story. thanks for writing this. sign me up for programing as a little with an on-off switch. I too feel sorry for Chris. he seems to be the odd man out. although there are plenty of story lines that could be opened up at an institutional setting.
12/5/20, 12:27 AM
Great first story! And welcome....we need more pups writing stories. That was a good and well written abduction and transformation pup story.
12/4/20, 11:12 PM
@sissybabymina I am not sure if you are being sarcastic. :p If not: there's a throwaway line about how his parents locked him in a state institution for mentally handicapped adults.
12/4/20, 11:08 PM
Loved this! Brutal but hot and well written.
12/4/20, 10:46 PM
Just ordered one!