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12/4/20, 8:30 PM
Damn, what happened to Chris, tho? lol
12/4/20, 7:26 PM
@Viridian Ahaha now that would be quite a challenge XD Thank you for the comment!
12/4/20, 6:50 PM
...I'm crying. I'm actually *crying.* You did a phenomenal job at capturing the pull between wanting to be a child again--to be free to do what you wish, to lose all inhibition--and the absolute horror of the same idea. The description of Ken tricking people into becoming permanently handicapped adults made me sick...and yet the ending brings tears to my eyes. Ken's villain monologue about "I know what's best" was also perfect; the greatest villains are the ones who genuinely believe they're doing the right thing. This story has broken my heart...well done.
12/4/20, 6:20 PM
this ending made me very very said for Erics sake
12/4/20, 6:09 PM
Love this; hope we get more someday!
12/4/20, 2:55 PM
ken got his comeuppance finally but the ending was really bittersweet. I find it really cute that Liam and ben can safely regress to toddlers and being themselves back whenever they want. all in all. this was a phenomenal series and read. thank you so much for writing this, can't wait to see what you write in the future. .
12/4/20, 2:17 PM
Great way to end this story!
12/4/20, 2:14 PM
What a great ending! Bittersweet, but mostly what everyone deserves. This is one of the best pieces on here.
Anonymous
12/4/20, 2:10 PM
Wow! What an awesome ending to this well written series. I liked the explanation of the tantalizing appeal of dumbing down and the karmic justice exacted upon Ken and Chris. Great job!
12/4/20, 1:22 PM
The premise is good and the execution is fun. Plenty of potential for expansion. Consider doing the songs. :-)