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12/5/20, 12:55 AM
Truly amazing story. Loved every word of it. i think we all admit we have thought about what would our lives be like if we just escaped the stresses and worries of adulthood. now Mindwiper are u in Australia or New Zealand? because the Countdown supermarket reference was noticed. Hope to see more of your work in the coming months. Keep it up.
12/5/20, 12:36 AM
great story. thanks for writing this. sign me up for programing as a little with an on-off switch. I too feel sorry for Chris. he seems to be the odd man out. although there are plenty of story lines that could be opened up at an institutional setting.
12/5/20, 12:27 AM
Great first story! And welcome....we need more pups writing stories. That was a good and well written abduction and transformation pup story.
12/4/20, 11:12 PM
@sissybabymina I am not sure if you are being sarcastic. :p If not: there's a throwaway line about how his parents locked him in a state institution for mentally handicapped adults.
12/4/20, 11:08 PM
Loved this! Brutal but hot and well written.
12/4/20, 10:46 PM
Just ordered one!
12/4/20, 10:15 PM
i feel unsatisfied it was like i was edge to point were the story was over😥
12/4/20, 8:30 PM
Damn, what happened to Chris, tho? lol
12/4/20, 7:26 PM
@Viridian Ahaha now that would be quite a challenge XD Thank you for the comment!
12/4/20, 6:50 PM
...I'm crying. I'm actually *crying.* You did a phenomenal job at capturing the pull between wanting to be a child again--to be free to do what you wish, to lose all inhibition--and the absolute horror of the same idea. The description of Ken tricking people into becoming permanently handicapped adults made me sick...and yet the ending brings tears to my eyes. Ken's villain monologue about "I know what's best" was also perfect; the greatest villains are the ones who genuinely believe they're doing the right thing. This story has broken my heart...well done.