Great story wish I knew where that pub was!!!!

Very creative way to conclude this great series.

Been so long since an update! 🥺

Deej guessed it right. I did not know that the sun was intended to be a clue to point at Larry. Would like to see more about how Larry was turned by user#341.

Ohh, I like this story. I'm a sucker for fantasy settings in general, and buff elves? Even better. The idea of the mask is amazing, although it would have been nice to see more of the older elve falling under its spell. The ending is also really nice, with the elves being allowed to go and getting their land back. Good endings like that aren't seen often on stories like that, so I appreciate it all the more. i look forward to reading more of your stories in future

A great story!

Wonderfully done dude! Good job!

I've been checking the site ten times a day for this conclusion--and it did NOT disappoint! What a twist! I can't wait to go back and reread the story to find all the clues mentioned here. And I am also glad that the characters came out OK (and hotter! and gay!) having learned their lessons. Bigger, this was truly an incredible story. You should be so proud! Agatha is smiling down on you. :D

Yes! I totally called it as Larry after chapter 4 I think. Congratulations on an amazing series that seems to have generated a lot of engagement. I often find that long, multipart stories really start to drag after about three chapters, but this stayed fresh, and hot! I usually prefer one-shots but damn! this was worth sticking around for. Genuine envy for how great a writer you are.

I was scrolling around my favorite stories list when this series caught my eye again. As I was giving myself a helping hand to this chapter, I remembered that I never actually left my thoughts on it, even though I said I would. Well, what better time than the present? I was a bit wary of James’ entrance into the story, as I felt he might detract from the domination of the couple, however, I quickly warmed up to him, and changed my tune on that score, thinking he was actually the perfect addition in the end. Still, I found it a little deplorable, as he did steal much of the spotlight from the pair (I felt Austin was particularly neglected and pushed to the side, though his role as servant explains that in a respect). After all, James’ introduction and induction take up approximately the first 5000 words of the total 9000. But I can’t complain about that, as his induction is fantastic and is probably the best part of the piece. The climactic battle of the hypnotists was awesome in many respects, with Blaine finally taking him down. It was hot and tense. I think the reason I enjoyed it so much was the detail, and for this reader, nothing is hotter than getting complete control of a sexy, straight hunk. I particularly liked the part where James comes down with goatee shaved, cap trashed, hair slicked, tie fastened. He was a whole new man, inside and out, shaped to Blaine's desires. Good stuff. Then... the rest. I’m not disappointed by how the story development went, but I’m a bit... unsatisfied. The rest was, to me anyway, a mixture of bland, rushed maybe... lacking. Don’t get me wrong, I thought it was great, and the writing is superb, but at the end I was still hungry. I won’t say the story needed to be super long or anything, but it felt more like the length of a regular story, a regular episode, rather than, let’s say, the two hour finale. I think what I found 'bland' so to speak, was that by the dinner scene all three men had been relatively zombified, and were rather passive. There was some resistance, but by then the pace was set. You got me good with the part where Levi was obediently repeating what Blaine was telling him at that one point in the story. I don't know what it is, but I find mindless repetition so sexy... lmao. Loved that part, too. In many places, this story had me saying to myself, “Aww, I wish I could’ve seen that!” Some examples: “Having been completely heterosexual up until ten minutes ago, James...” I would’ve paid good money to see his sexual conversion through Blaine’s hypnosis, in Blaine fashion. “... subtle stainless steel eternity collar locked around his neck. Blaine had fitted all three of the older men with such collars at the culmination of the dinner party the night before.” Aww man, I missed a collaring ceremony! Haha too bad... I felt kind of like a diner whose plate was being taken from him before he could finish each course, from the point after James’ downfall. The dinner scene, the sex scene, and the morning after scene were taken from me too quickly haha. They weren’t bad; I liked what I was ‘eating,’ but I was just hungry for more. Again, probably because those scenes were crammed in with the last 4000 words. Of course, in terms of the ending and such, you know how I feel about that. Blaine bagged himself a handful of lovely slaves, and is Master of the house. Everyone is content in his place, and a happier ending could not have been written.  Beautiful. Haha, my only wish is that I could have heard about the book that Blaine was getting Austin to write.  This was a fun series. Thanks a bunch, and maybe we'll see more in the future?