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12/2/20, 2:00 PM
Mal is great!
12/2/20, 1:59 PM
Great story wish I knew where that pub was!!!!
12/2/20, 1:19 PM
Very creative way to conclude this great series.
giveintothemusk
12/2/20, 11:40 AM
Been so long since an update! 🥺
12/2/20, 11:35 AM
Deej guessed it right. I did not know that the sun was intended to be a clue to point at Larry. Would like to see more about how Larry was turned by user#341.
Anonym
12/2/20, 11:28 AM
Ohh, I like this story. I'm a sucker for fantasy settings in general, and buff elves? Even better. The idea of the mask is amazing, although it would have been nice to see more of the older elve falling under its spell. The ending is also really nice, with the elves being allowed to go and getting their land back. Good endings like that aren't seen often on stories like that, so I appreciate it all the more. i look forward to reading more of your stories in future
giveintothemusk
12/2/20, 11:22 AM
A great story!
12/2/20, 10:42 AM
Wonderfully done dude! Good job!
12/2/20, 10:35 AM
I've been checking the site ten times a day for this conclusion--and it did NOT disappoint! What a twist! I can't wait to go back and reread the story to find all the clues mentioned here. And I am also glad that the characters came out OK (and hotter! and gay!) having learned their lessons. Bigger, this was truly an incredible story. You should be so proud! Agatha is smiling down on you. :D
Braxton fan
12/2/20, 10:10 AM
Yes! I totally called it as Larry after chapter 4 I think. Congratulations on an amazing series that seems to have generated a lot of engagement. I often find that long, multipart stories really start to drag after about three chapters, but this stayed fresh, and hot! I usually prefer one-shots but damn! this was worth sticking around for. Genuine envy for how great a writer you are.