Recent Comments

12/2/20, 1:22 AM
This was great. I love the dog part, esp the plants coming from dog cum. Any difference in how it effects the human host I am wondering. Toby sure sounds like a dog's name. Perhaps a symbiote dog man hybrid. WOOF! I look forward to the next chapter and Dad...the beginning of the pack perhaps.
12/2/20, 12:29 AM
Elves + pup play? I am so happy this exists - it's always nice seeing new hypnosis stories in a fantasy setting. This was a fun (and hot) read - and the ending was surprisingly sweet. Nicely done (and, if you're ever interested in writing a sequel, I'd love to see more of Kelsien and Arjun)!
12/2/20, 12:19 AM
i miss this badly. i hope there will be new update soon!
12/1/20, 11:30 PM
Really enjoyed this - for a first story this was an amazing work. You're a great author - hope you share more!!!
12/1/20, 10:40 PM
Well done! Please write more!
12/1/20, 9:37 PM
Loved this story! The bottom pig transformation was hot AF, and I really got into the newly enhanced Abuser Top and his dirty realizations. Any chance at getting an additional chapter or two??
Anonymous
12/1/20, 7:03 PM
This was incredibly hot. I liked the happy naked dog-man, I liked the description, how Arjun experienced the brainwash (even though some more details would have been nice). I liked the kind of evil nature, with which the tinkerer acted, but how he let the two elves go in the end. And I absolutly loved how the two elves just barked cause of the aftereffect. Please more like that :)
EJG
12/1/20, 6:06 PM
Oh...and seeing as they are at the spa,maybe throw out some changes to some new side characters they might bump in2.?
Anonymous
12/1/20, 4:59 PM
This is extremely hot! I can't wait until Trev's ass gets even bigger and he turns into a slut like his brother.
12/1/20, 4:47 PM
Thank you for the awesome comments everyone! i'm on the brainstorming stage for the next series for now, so I appreciate the suggestions that some of you sent to me. I would welcome other thoughts and Ideas as well if anyone has any! Thank you!