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11/30/20, 10:04 AM
I think this is fantastic. I love the scene where Michael is in the bathroom watching his body start to change. I just would have stretched out his resistance a little bit longer, to make him really struggle over the question of whether to take that second hit of pollen.
11/30/20, 8:48 AM
Larry. He was downstairs for most of the evening. Plenty of time to set things up unnoticed, especially with the commotion upstairs. He showed just in time for the power to fail. He was in the basement when Dimitri got locked in the breaker room and when Asher was converted. He was with the others while Mathilde, Wesley, and Braxton were converted. He was presence during Dimitri's conversion. After that, he wasn't identified by name again. He had prior knowledge of the house, having grown up there. As far as this story's Justice Wargrave goes, why not the son of the judge?
11/30/20, 8:29 AM
Also as a side note, I think CaF is my favorite story of yours to date, even better than WoT in my opinion, and i think ive re-read it at least 10 times since it came out. I think maybe its cause you started with hypnotising the dad first, unlike with Tim or Lucas in WoT. Really looking forward to that chapter 2. Thankfully its not that far off haha.
11/30/20, 8:19 AM
Ah for me its just a personal preference of not enjoying the story as much if the victim is already gay to begin with. Also there isnt any incest, though that isnt as big of an issue as the previous point. That being said, the scene where Chris is kneeling at his home while knowing/watching his boyfriend giving Rattenfinger a blowjob was pretty hot as well. Thanks for writing and responding so quickly as always :) ill be sure to check out your other story on christmas eve as well
11/30/20, 8:17 AM
wow, really good! got me gooning over my dong
giveintothemusk
11/30/20, 7:45 AM
Excellent story! 😊
11/30/20, 7:34 AM
@Moose: The muse hit me a couple of months ago and I got a bunch of work done on both Cop A Feel and Web of Trust, as well as writing two independent stories, and I got started on a third. Then, the muse went somewhere else. It's the most I've ever written in close proximity. I'll actually be releasing the second independent story around Christmas, since it's set on Christmas Eve. After that, you'll start to see more of Cop A Feel and Web of Trust. The next chapter of CaF is looking good, but things after that are only in very rough drafts, so you'll probably see chapter 2 of CaF soon after Christmas and then maybe alternating WoT/CaF after that. This story *was* inspired by Blondie's story, which may be why it felt different to my usual. I'm curious what you felt was different about it, though, as it hits several of my usual themes. Also, I don't want to write the same thing all the time, so there's that too. @JockPupTraxxx: Stories where the people are unhappy turn me off completely, so I don't write storylines like that unless there's a longer-term goal (e.g., Chapter 1 of Prom Night vs. where the rest of the story goes).
11/30/20, 6:29 AM
Really love the twist.
11/30/20, 6:25 AM
Thank you for your feedback, guys! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and that the concept of consensual hypnosis also got some fans. And Benv, I'm afraid there won't be a second part, this story was a gift for a friend and so far there isn't any more planned.
Lusty Stallion
11/30/20, 6:17 AM
Amazing work! Please continue. We want to see what happens to the next incidental male he meets