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Nov 14, 2020
11/29/20, 8:22 AM
I absolutely enjoyed this!
Chastor
11/29/20, 7:40 AM
Wonderful story, I too hope that you'll find the time to expand it into multiple chapters one day
Jimmy M
11/29/20, 5:06 AM
Loved the story, i agree with Kyle, it should have more chapters
11/29/20, 4:41 AM
Very hot story! I hope that you'll write more.
11/29/20, 4:00 AM
How about a homophobic jock turned into an exhibitionist that loves showing off his hot smooth body to other guys?
11/29/20, 3:32 AM
I'm always down for some little guy taking the big ones. Love it!
11/29/20, 3:29 AM
The story was so intense and addicting. More of this. ‼
boy Jason
11/29/20, 3:09 AM
If Father ever needs another shoeshine boy, I would like to apply.
Bill
11/29/20, 2:04 AM
@puppykix The fact that this is a hypno site doesn't mean we need to accept all stories here without critism. The "don't like don't read" moto tries to save a person from critism even though it can be welcomed sometimes, and when faced with a moral dilemma I think it's our duty to comment on it Also, the comparison to rape is because it is rape, even if it's only a fantasy, talking advantage of a toddler who cannot give consent is rape.
Ponderer
11/29/20, 1:51 AM
I have two points to share, one about the plot itself a d the other about the philosophy of it all. On the plot scale, I'll join the rest saying how interesting this chapter was. Yet something that I didn't like was the unrelated appearance of Chris. Maybe I missed it, but it seems Chris's character just appeared out of the blue to fix up the plot whole of Ken being a father alone. It would be nice if we would get more hints about him first. On the ethical level, I join @Delicious1papaya 's concerns. There IS a difference between stripped intelligence, partially dumbing down and age regression. You took care to describe to us how they are in fact children, called them toddlers and sent them to daycare, so unsurprisingly we see them and babies and therefore they are off bound (not only minors but toddlers who have no concept of sex). As @Feed Your Head had said, the story is just too close to reality to be just fapping material and crosses over to the uncanny valley. This doesn't mean it's necessarily a bad thing; for a horror story this is great, but I'm not sure most of us here "signed up" for horror stories, and once again, the child thing is... Uncomfortable. Especially since Ken had the powers to achieve it all without it. One last thing about consent, even if the experiment wasn't a hoax, they didn't sign up for eternal regression so you can't say they gave their consent when they were fine. I know it's sounds weird when we talk about non con in most stories, but when the victim is asked about the crime and rejects it, the violation of his rights is worse in some way, since he knows what's going on and his wishes are being directly disobeyd. I do hope there will be justice in some sort, even if it won't include the trio getting their smarts back (though I really hope they do. Forever is just too long)