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Ponderer
11/29/20, 1:51 AM
I have two points to share, one about the plot itself a d the other about the philosophy of it all. On the plot scale, I'll join the rest saying how interesting this chapter was. Yet something that I didn't like was the unrelated appearance of Chris. Maybe I missed it, but it seems Chris's character just appeared out of the blue to fix up the plot whole of Ken being a father alone. It would be nice if we would get more hints about him first. On the ethical level, I join @Delicious1papaya 's concerns. There IS a difference between stripped intelligence, partially dumbing down and age regression. You took care to describe to us how they are in fact children, called them toddlers and sent them to daycare, so unsurprisingly we see them and babies and therefore they are off bound (not only minors but toddlers who have no concept of sex). As @Feed Your Head had said, the story is just too close to reality to be just fapping material and crosses over to the uncanny valley. This doesn't mean it's necessarily a bad thing; for a horror story this is great, but I'm not sure most of us here "signed up" for horror stories, and once again, the child thing is... Uncomfortable. Especially since Ken had the powers to achieve it all without it. One last thing about consent, even if the experiment wasn't a hoax, they didn't sign up for eternal regression so you can't say they gave their consent when they were fine. I know it's sounds weird when we talk about non con in most stories, but when the victim is asked about the crime and rejects it, the violation of his rights is worse in some way, since he knows what's going on and his wishes are being directly disobeyd. I do hope there will be justice in some sort, even if it won't include the trio getting their smarts back (though I really hope they do. Forever is just too long)
11/29/20, 1:01 AM
> Wow – thank you! That sentence felt very much like one of mine – balanced phrases, percussive consonants, strong adjectives – well done! I am not surprised. I've been reading your stuff since I was 15, 12 years ago. You, and all your stuff, played a huge role in my literary-sexual awakening. Thank you for writing ♡
11/29/20, 12:22 AM
For some reason, I always imagine Marc Evan Jackson as Robin (probably because of the way his character talks in Brooklyn Nine Nine, which I think is similar to the way Robin does), which I find absolutely hilarious. Also, I usually have a preference for stories that are more about the controller emotions/thoughts/psych and less about the changes the controlled is going through. But damn, this story is incredibly well written, detailed and I loved the first four chapter (haven't read the 5th one yet, and I'll probably forget to review your story if I don't do it beforehand). So, thanks a bunch for the great story!
11/28/20, 10:14 PM
Brilliant story, really enjoyed it! If you feel like writing the full, unabridged, version sometime that'd definately be a treat!
Martin
11/28/20, 9:43 PM
FUCK IT, was this chapter hot! One of the most intense mind-regression scenes I've read in a long time, if not ever. And also thanks to all the commenters, who actually already said everything there is to say. Especially @Feed Your Head and @sissybabymina who are both right on the spot. But also to @Delicious1papaya, because I hear and understand your concerns just all too well. It's funny, despite all this atrocities which are fantasized about on this site, as soon as we see children - even just men regressed into children - as part of the action, there are red flags everywhere. It's a bit strange, though, because ripping a human being of all their intelligence and personality WITHOUT turning them into a toddler is just as horrific an act than what's described here in this story. But we don't even flinch at these kind of fantasies. So there's really not much of any rationalization that we make a difference there - only that we're probably all are wired to protect our offspring. Which is a good thing. Again, thank you @Mindwiper for this terrific story and I'm really curious what the conclusion will look like!
Anonymous
11/28/20, 9:18 PM
This is the best chastity story on this site, I wish more could write about it the same way you do
EJG
11/28/20, 7:54 PM
You know. Judging by my replies to this story,that i found it hot,and up there with New Years Eve and Bad Apples in my personal fetish. If there is a 3rd chapter i would still love to follow Jim in slutting himself out to eve more MEN who have **no** guilt in using him and he starts to **like** it?. The Office cum dump scenario is hot. But unfortunately i think the rutting and the mouthwashes powers will wear itself out But i'm in the minority and others will want a happy ending U are the master of your own works, play on
11/28/20, 6:56 PM
@Feed Your Head : Why, thank you for all the nice words! You've done a great analysis of the story so far and your comments are really heartwarming! <3 <3 <3 @Deej : Wes already gave Seb a hint back in chapter 4 what would happen if they guessed wrong. Good thing he told him! Jen and Theo sus, huh? ;-) @anon#1 : We have not seen Braxton for a long time indeed :-) @Cutlerfan : Sebastian indeed got close to die there. Perhaps the one(s), if there's any, who set the game already had a backup plan if that would have happened? And you brought a good point there: how do changing the homophobes into beasts help gay people in the end? I guess we don't have the choice but wait till sunrise and see how this night ends! ;-)
11/28/20, 6:49 PM
A big bear hugged one, then there were two...well, Bigger, I have to hand it to you. You actually made me feel a bit of sympathy for Victor! He was another messed-up person after all...well done. It doesn't excuse his horrific actions, but I can at least understand them now. And that helps. Also, AMAZING job on Jen's flashback. What a horribly selfish person! Imagine someone telling you a huge secret and making it all about them. So I have a sneaking suspicion that Roger is behind the magical events, with Theo as his lackey. And perhaps Theo getting soaked in a bit of the fluids around the house will transform him, too. Next the sun will rise, and one of two will get all frizzled up... :O
11/28/20, 6:47 PM
@Cutlerfan : Thank you! <3 @Feed Your Head : Finding a fitting verb relating to "law" or "chancery" for the chapter title took me longer than writing this chapter, actually! Thank you! <3 @anon#1 : Exhausting as in long and boring or as in things are getting intense? Either way, I hope you liked it! :-D @idolikeyoorai : A bad ending always depends from which character you look it from. This seems like it's going toward a disastrous ending from our main crew, but possibly a good ending for our (maybe) imposter(s)! :-D @Deej : Jen sus, huh? ;-)