@Cutlerfan : Thank you! <3 @Feed Your Head : Finding a fitting verb relating to "law" or "chancery" for the chapter title took me longer than writing this chapter, actually! Thank you! <3 @anon#1 : Exhausting as in long and boring or as in things are getting intense? Either way, I hope you liked it! :-D @idolikeyoorai : A bad ending always depends from which character you look it from. This seems like it's going toward a disastrous ending from our main crew, but possibly a good ending for our (maybe) imposter(s)! :-D @Deej : Jen sus, huh? ;-)

@sissybabymina Those are excellent points! I especially like the point that hypnosis is the unethical part to begin with. As a general rule (ha ha, I'm about to contradict myself), I try not to paint all things as equal in any aspect of life; I try to find nuance and spectra in everything, with exceptions. And I think I view these stories the same way; yes, the hypnosis presented in these stories is inherently unethical, but not all hypnosis is created equal, if that makes sense (kind of like saying "Theft is inherently unethical, but stealing food to prevent starvation is different than stealing a PlayStation 5"). Does that make sense? For me, it's a kind of inversely proportional rule: the more fantastic/impossible a story is, the easier a time I have digesting it. People with magical mind control relics, inherent powers, evil curses, or genetically engineered pills/food? I can say "Well, this is clearly fantasy." Demons manifesting or fursonas? Same deal. But when a story seems more plausible--like this one, using real hypnotic techniques, implying subliminal messages in phones, and going into detail about the "realism" of the world (the day care, worrying about the college populace's reaction, etc.)--it is harder for me to enjoy the ride. I remember reading a book once that said "Porn is the opposite of thought"--it works on a very basic, almost subconscious human desire. So when a story activates the conscious mind and makes me think, it slowly becomes less sexy--the more my brain works, the less my "lower brain" does. :p And this story DEFINITELY activates my upper brain moreso than my lower! That is not to say it is a bad story. It is a different story is all. What do you think? :)

which animals each of the 8 homophobes were turned? I did not get all of them

"There are countless stories on this site with non-consensual sex." I would argue that *literally almost ever story* on this site matches that description. If you take everything inherent to the hypno/mind control/brainwash kink to its natural conclusion, and strip away the context and just leave behind literally what happens in the story, once *anybody* fucks in any of these damn stories, it's full-on rape. I don't know how people could pick ethical lines between them; it's all crazy, crazy unethical, because the types of manipulation present in these stories all go so far beyond how the real practices and techniques they imitate work, and how effective they could possibly be; if anything like the stuff that's in these stories were actually possible, with the ease and efficacy at which the stories present them (for the convenience of a story lasting exactly the time it takes to bust a nut!), the world and society as we know them likely would not exist in any form we could recognize. Like, some kind of Big Brother-esque entity would own you and everybody you know, and you wouldn't think anything is weird about it, because you wouldn't be you. In terms of ethics, that's what we're dealing with here in every story, just on a smaller scale. I don't really see how ethical lines can be drawn between them; they're all equally ethically repulsive, by the realistic ethical logic that exists in the world we live in. It's just a question if you're comfortable with the particular sub-kink that goes in with the hypno kink, but that's not a boundary that affects the ethics of the situation, that's a boundary that affects only how you, the reader, feel about it. If you busted to any of these stories on this site, your kink is equivalent to everybody's hypno kink, and out of all the fetishes I'm aware of, hypno kink sits up in the top tier of ethical deplorability, with stuff like rape and slavery and snuff - because, like I said earlier, when you strip away the context that *the hypno in hypno kink art and prose is so unrealistic and impossible that it can only be seen as fantastical,* virtually every hypno kink story either involves a violation of consent and autonomy so egregious that would be fundamentally equivalent to a rape, an enslaving, or the complete subversion or destruction of the mind and consciousness to the extent which most people's core values would equivocate to something at least as bad as an actual murder. Me, I get nothing sexual out of practicing hypnosis, and I've never really done it besides on myself, being guided by this or that file. When I'm consuming hypno kink media, I'm always the sub. I'm always reading these stories from the perspective of projecting myself onto the person who is losing control, and losing their mind and their self. So, it's pretty easy for me to not be worried about the ethics of any of it. It seems like that may not be as easy for those who have a vers or domme experience with hypno kink, but I feel as if the important thing to remember is that *whatever happens in a hypno story, the hypnosis* **is** *the part of it that's unethical;* whatever follows the hypnosis, no matter what it is, doesn't really matter, in my opinion; because it's the coercion and subversion that is the actual moral crime, independent what it's used for by the subject in the porn that's doing it. I don't really see how you could morally rank the kinks where some hypno porn is okay, but when it crosses a certain line, it then becomes unethical. If you're fapping to this, you're getting aroused by a radically unethical situation, already; how the hell are we supposed to shame each other about the ancillary kinks on a site that is entirely dedicated to a kink that is inherently highly unethical and niche?

Thanks! Actually, I'm probably going to do a sequel to Bullies at some point, but don't know when I'll find the time.

Fantastic story. Very sexy and no exaggerations. The master being a power bottom was a grateful surprise (It's rare to read stories with them).

Fantastic idea, extremely well written and yes it's hot. I have to say I just hate the fact that Eric became little but I love this story and how you've taken us on this journey and made us think! weirdly enough, I had been hoping that Eric and Ken were going to become the parents lol

You're awesome dude. Would be great to read more of this, with different types of frat dudes getting different punishments based on their weaknesses or crimes. Your other story, 'Bullies' is, I think, my favourite story on here - bar none

Lord, this is horrifyingly chilling and hot as hell. Well fucking done.

Nice work, man. The time gap is too big for my silly brain to fill, though. Would love to know what actually happened to the guys.