"There are countless stories on this site with non-consensual sex." I would argue that *literally almost ever story* on this site matches that description. If you take everything inherent to the hypno/mind control/brainwash kink to its natural conclusion, and strip away the context and just leave behind literally what happens in the story, once *anybody* fucks in any of these damn stories, it's full-on rape. I don't know how people could pick ethical lines between them; it's all crazy, crazy unethical, because the types of manipulation present in these stories all go so far beyond how the real practices and techniques they imitate work, and how effective they could possibly be; if anything like the stuff that's in these stories were actually possible, with the ease and efficacy at which the stories present them (for the convenience of a story lasting exactly the time it takes to bust a nut!), the world and society as we know them likely would not exist in any form we could recognize. Like, some kind of Big Brother-esque entity would own you and everybody you know, and you wouldn't think anything is weird about it, because you wouldn't be you. In terms of ethics, that's what we're dealing with here in every story, just on a smaller scale. I don't really see how ethical lines can be drawn between them; they're all equally ethically repulsive, by the realistic ethical logic that exists in the world we live in. It's just a question if you're comfortable with the particular sub-kink that goes in with the hypno kink, but that's not a boundary that affects the ethics of the situation, that's a boundary that affects only how you, the reader, feel about it. If you busted to any of these stories on this site, your kink is equivalent to everybody's hypno kink, and out of all the fetishes I'm aware of, hypno kink sits up in the top tier of ethical deplorability, with stuff like rape and slavery and snuff - because, like I said earlier, when you strip away the context that *the hypno in hypno kink art and prose is so unrealistic and impossible that it can only be seen as fantastical,* virtually every hypno kink story either involves a violation of consent and autonomy so egregious that would be fundamentally equivalent to a rape, an enslaving, or the complete subversion or destruction of the mind and consciousness to the extent which most people's core values would equivocate to something at least as bad as an actual murder. Me, I get nothing sexual out of practicing hypnosis, and I've never really done it besides on myself, being guided by this or that file. When I'm consuming hypno kink media, I'm always the sub. I'm always reading these stories from the perspective of projecting myself onto the person who is losing control, and losing their mind and their self. So, it's pretty easy for me to not be worried about the ethics of any of it. It seems like that may not be as easy for those who have a vers or domme experience with hypno kink, but I feel as if the important thing to remember is that *whatever happens in a hypno story, the hypnosis* **is** *the part of it that's unethical;* whatever follows the hypnosis, no matter what it is, doesn't really matter, in my opinion; because it's the coercion and subversion that is the actual moral crime, independent what it's used for by the subject in the porn that's doing it. I don't really see how you could morally rank the kinks where some hypno porn is okay, but when it crosses a certain line, it then becomes unethical. If you're fapping to this, you're getting aroused by a radically unethical situation, already; how the hell are we supposed to shame each other about the ancillary kinks on a site that is entirely dedicated to a kink that is inherently highly unethical and niche?

Thanks! Actually, I'm probably going to do a sequel to Bullies at some point, but don't know when I'll find the time.

Fantastic story. Very sexy and no exaggerations. The master being a power bottom was a grateful surprise (It's rare to read stories with them).

Fantastic idea, extremely well written and yes it's hot. I have to say I just hate the fact that Eric became little but I love this story and how you've taken us on this journey and made us think! weirdly enough, I had been hoping that Eric and Ken were going to become the parents lol

You're awesome dude. Would be great to read more of this, with different types of frat dudes getting different punishments based on their weaknesses or crimes. Your other story, 'Bullies' is, I think, my favourite story on here - bar none

Lord, this is horrifyingly chilling and hot as hell. Well fucking done.

Nice work, man. The time gap is too big for my silly brain to fill, though. Would love to know what actually happened to the guys.

I would have loved more detail and torture; maybe made into a two or three part story, but it was still a good story. nice work!

To the two reviewers above: I agree this story was a bit rushed. I had the idea two months ago, but between work and the holidays, I just didn't have the time I needed to flesh everything out. Maybe after the new year, I'll do "Grand Theft Penis: Reloaded" and expand the story. I had wanted to include full depictions of Kevin's LSAT experience, Moose and Jason's increasingly humiliating efforts to avoid getting caught in the locker room shower with hard-ons, a scene involving the SIRs forced to shave each other (with a special depilatory cream that lasts for years!), and more tickling scenes (which is one of my bigger kinks). Also, there was going to be a subplot where the brothers had to pay increasingly large sums of cash to various charities to avoid Wynne's tortures to the point that they got cut off from their family's and ultimately bankrupted the frat. Another reason I considered not posting this as part of the Halloween contest. But I was afraid if I put it off, I would procrastinate and not post it for months. I'm bad about that.

> I really like the author asides when they appear–you manage to strike a perfect balance between winking/nudging (which gets really old after a while) and speaking frankly to the reader without totally removing them from the world of the story. > I love Tom Robbins -- and I will take any chance I can to plug him! If you have not read him, immediately stop reading this and order one of his books on Amazon (or whatever service you use). May I recommend "SKINNY LEGS AND ALL" -- my first exposure to him -- his famous "EVEN COWGIRLS GET THE BLUES" or his beautiful "JITTERBUG PERFUME" where we learn the secret of immortality is sex and beets. Funny, insightful, his love of language and playful narratives will make you love words to the point where reading and dancing are the same thing. My narrative asides are all me channeling Tom Robbins. > West Virginia crew fleeing the scene and heading to parts unknown. Do I sense a European adventure coming? > Think a little more tropically. In the FORUM, we've been discussing symbionts and cold weather/ winter/ darkness and whether those would be weaknesses for them. I say, let's go south! > I love how the story serves a small reminder of what I think is one of your major themes–the notion that power almost always corrupts. (THEY)... keep desiring more, more, MORE despite having amazing bodies and perfect health. Nothing is ever enough, especially the feeling of being worshipped. In the old stories, gods needed praise and worship like a drug–it kept them alive and powerful. > This is so well stated, I just wanted to draw attention to it again and thank you for the observation.