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Anonymous
11/28/20, 12:01 PM
I love your work Evelded, but it would be great to have a follow up of how each of the seventeen brothers were humiliated.
11/28/20, 11:41 AM
@Delicious1papaya Ken is the villain. You are supposed to hate him, he is doing awful, evil things. But this is fiction and no one is saying what is happening in the story is a good thing. There are countless stories on this site with non-consensual sex. Men are reduced to slaves, or turned mentally into puppies and forced to have sex. Are those stories really promoting slavery, rape and bestiality? And in any case this certainly isn't pedophilia because Ken is aroused by Eric's grown adult body. That he has wiped away his intelligence to gain control over him is little different to bimbofication stories or the others I've listed above. All these stories require a suspension of disbelief. There's no way a university would actually sanction such an experiment obviously. But yes I like to keep my stories as close to reality as possible so that the reader and actually put themselves in the shoes of the victim or victims. You are meant to empathise with them, not see Ken as a hero, or the story as condoning what's being done to them. I choose mental regression to toddler level as the means of their loss of independence and subjugation (as opposed to enslavement) because that's been my fantasy ever since I was a nerdy and very mature kid myself. I've always been intrigued by the idea of losing those aspects of my own personality: intellect, maturity and body modesty. It's all about the loss of power and control, as many stories on this site are. I would add that many ABs are into sexual roleplay. For some it is a non-sexual thing and they want to keep little space and adult needs totally separate. But for many others it is a sexual kink.
Anonymous
11/28/20, 11:13 AM
It was a good story but it felt rush.
Helloitsme
11/28/20, 11:06 AM
Love this! When do you think the next chapter will be out?
11/28/20, 11:02 AM
@Delicious1papaya, it sounds like you should take those complaints up with Ken and not with Mindwiper, who's writing a terrific work of fiction. I'm really enjoying this story, and I thought the scene with Eric's transformation was both chilling and arousing. But I will say that sometimes the story's a little too realistic for its own good. By the end, when I should have been focusing on what was happening to Eric, I got really distracted thinking about the logistics of Chris and Ken's plan. I really wish the story hadn't included those details about the adult daycare, partly because I now think of Eric, Liam, and Ben as mentally disabled people, but also because it makes me focus on the hassle of babysitting them all day long, making sure they don't get into trouble. It's almost the opposite of the harem scenario we usually get, where having the harem makes life easier for the mind controller. I know the story's probably not going this way, but I would be very amused if the conclusion involved Ken and Chris feeling overwhelmed by the labor of looking after four infantile grown men, then desperately trying to turn them back to normal; it would be just desserts if they ended up just as frazzled as most parents of toddlers are.
Speedo Stud
11/28/20, 10:47 AM
Yes!!! it's too bad you never added more Matthew Taylor debasement into his true role as a Bitched Out, Bottom Slut, Submissive Whore! But, I truly appreciate your writing and sharing this sin-fully hot tale.
11/28/20, 10:14 AM
OK, so now that you've confirmed the motivation, how do you defend against accusations of hypersexualisation of minors and pedophilia? With such a strong skill, Ken really didn't need to regress them to little boys, did he? He could have easily just controlled their bodies as he does anyway - and have sex with them as he originally wanted. But no, they wanted to have children and they wanted to have sex with them. So how does jerking off a 3-year old fit in the grand scheme of things?
11/28/20, 10:13 AM
Second puberty here we cum! I can't wait to see how he's going to change from that!
Vivid
11/28/20, 10:00 AM
love the idea of detachment, and enjoyed the hint of possibly something more between Mr Wynne and Jack. As a singular story piece i think it did well. If this was ever written into a series then going down a list of kinks and targeted events would be enjoyable. Great work, and good luck with the challenge.
boi98229
11/28/20, 9:23 AM
Hotly debated and horrifyingly hot! i have to admit that, like Mike/Mikey, i feel so drawn to try this as a subject to know how it feels and just how deeply one can actually be controlled. But if that depth of control or even half of that were possible, how could i possibly trust anyone to help me try it?! Still, it is rather flattering to have someone desire you as much as Ken did Eric! ;) Great story, by the way! It made my doodle all tingly! Thanks so much!