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11/28/20, 12:05 AM
I want to cry. I loved everything. Rugby boy saying "“I would’ve followed you anyway, because we were friends, because we’d both loved and submitted to powerful men. We’d had that in common, so we could support each other now. But you’ve barely gotten your power and already you abuse it. Mon ami, you disappoint me.” I now know why I love him so. He understands brotherhood and the hierarchy of men. Je t'adore, mon Rugby Boy. Adieu.
11/27/20, 11:45 PM
I see, good luck and looking forewords to it
11/27/20, 11:30 PM
I MOTHER FUCKING CALLED IT! Eric got GOT! I'm just a little proud of that. A chilling and wonderful addition to the story, thank you for the continued and consistent updates. your story is causing a lot of really deep debate, but i think that's a testament to the quality of the work. it feels so well written that it feels real enough that some people are uncomfortable. GO YOU. of course, if this were A) remotely plausible in real life, and B) something that actually happened, this would be horrifying. As fiction, I am LAPPING this stuff up, i have no issues with completely fictional literary characters having horrific shit happen to them. BRAVO! Hats should be doffed to you my friend!
Lusty Stallion
11/27/20, 10:20 PM
@darkblade2814 we're getting there. It's part of the plan. Yoir suggestions have heavily influemced the stoey so I thought I'd leave that for the next installment @Jr - yes let's @Ciriii57 - I could do it with a memtor figure. I'm not personally into a real Father and Son story though. But a surrogate Father, or perhaps a step Dad? Thanks for the suggestion
Elm
11/27/20, 6:45 PM
hopefully you can continue this story someday! its one of my favorites.
Nov 26, 2020
11/27/20, 6:30 PM
I loved all of this. Thank you for this story. I loved tales of the olds gods since childhood. I still do. This story combining great porn and knowledge of mythology is one of the best.
11/27/20, 5:57 PM
> Loved the music / warfare comparison. > Thank you. I just felt that scene needed underscoring. If it had been a movie, the orchestra would've been going wild and then cut off on Tully's reveal -- I was trying to catch that flavor on the page.
11/27/20, 5:46 PM
That was really fun. Loved the music / warfare comparison. Gave a laugh at Flower Oath. But now I'm wondering, since the flowers are repopulating, where are they repopulating from, and are their gardeners on the way.
11/27/20, 5:07 PM
The cock growing was an unforseen but definite plus imo! Hot evolution the guy went through! Interesting concept there with the wishes affecting the past. I could see potential for a series, especially if the genie/game wanders around! Good job!
screamingmoist
11/27/20, 5:07 PM
That's not a bad idea! I never thought about someone weaponizing it, but that would make for an interesting story.