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Lusty Stallion
11/27/20, 10:20 PM
@darkblade2814 we're getting there. It's part of the plan. Yoir suggestions have heavily influemced the stoey so I thought I'd leave that for the next installment @Jr - yes let's @Ciriii57 - I could do it with a memtor figure. I'm not personally into a real Father and Son story though. But a surrogate Father, or perhaps a step Dad? Thanks for the suggestion
Elm
11/27/20, 6:45 PM
hopefully you can continue this story someday! its one of my favorites.
Nov 26, 2020
11/27/20, 6:30 PM
I loved all of this. Thank you for this story. I loved tales of the olds gods since childhood. I still do. This story combining great porn and knowledge of mythology is one of the best.
11/27/20, 5:57 PM
> Loved the music / warfare comparison. > Thank you. I just felt that scene needed underscoring. If it had been a movie, the orchestra would've been going wild and then cut off on Tully's reveal -- I was trying to catch that flavor on the page.
11/27/20, 5:46 PM
That was really fun. Loved the music / warfare comparison. Gave a laugh at Flower Oath. But now I'm wondering, since the flowers are repopulating, where are they repopulating from, and are their gardeners on the way.
11/27/20, 5:07 PM
The cock growing was an unforseen but definite plus imo! Hot evolution the guy went through! Interesting concept there with the wishes affecting the past. I could see potential for a series, especially if the genie/game wanders around! Good job!
screamingmoist
11/27/20, 5:07 PM
That's not a bad idea! I never thought about someone weaponizing it, but that would make for an interesting story.
Nov 25, 2020
11/27/20, 5:03 PM
This story was pure bliss! Loved the changes implied where the guy transformed to fit the curse the witch forced upon him! The reality change revolving around it was super hot too! That's perhaps something I should try myself sometime! And the physical/mental changes brought upon with the transformation were kinks that I absolutely adore! Great story!
11/27/20, 4:40 PM
very hot loving this world a lot
11/27/20, 4:16 PM
Loved your discussion of the garden and the aggressive nature of plants. I appreciate the sense of humor you display throughout your writing. Wonderful work on this exciting second book of your series. I hope that you will be inspired at some point to continue the saga and write book 3.