Recent Comments

11/27/20, 2:36 PM
incredible story with great details. i can almost feel the pumpkin sliding over my head! I like the picture at the beginning to set the stage. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
11/27/20, 1:57 PM
no more continuation?
11/27/20, 1:46 PM
Great start. Please keep it coming !
Nov 26, 2020
11/27/20, 1:23 PM
As someone who has been fascinated by Asatru for years, I thought this was great, and I loved the tone of the story. And you nailed the friendly, obvious lust of a bear run to a tee! If there really was a collective of heathen bears, I would gladly give blot and more with them!
Ciriii57
11/27/20, 12:26 PM
How about a father and son out for a drink transform into a hot daddy son couple?
Jason
11/27/20, 12:07 PM
An awesome idea, I can't wait to see what's going to be next.
Jr
11/27/20, 11:44 AM
Let's turn a ladies man into a small dick muscle man. :)
11/27/20, 11:15 AM
Hope Fred will become a total leather badass jockboy. 3:)
11/27/20, 11:06 AM
Can't wait to read the following, especially when Toby will discover his lust for leather (the only material worthy for this body)... ;)
boi98229
11/27/20, 10:39 AM
Like Mindwiper, i get totally aroused on the idea of losing control to someone quite dominant. The loss of control in this story though is extreme, and feels very unethical, particularly with no tested recovery plan to return the intelligence of Ben and Liam and the indefinite delay in doing so. While personally i don't particularly like this loss of control as too extreme even in a story, i apparently have been able to compartmentalize the scary unethical part as just a story and the other part as something really worth trying and very arousing. While my normal preference is for the good guys to all win in the end, i have found that permanent loss of control in favor of the "bad" guy can be pretty tantalizing as well. Whichever way this goes, it's a hot story. Thanks so much!