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11/27/20, 4:06 AM
I find this story incredibly hot and return to it again and again.
11/27/20, 3:14 AM
Okay this is actually a really good first story. looking forward to more from you/more of these characters!
Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 11:54 PM
This was amazing man. i hope you decide to continue this story!
Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 11:14 PM
Thank you Stroppy Author, I really wanted to avoid treating Asatru like Wicca. I'm glad you did not find it disrespectful. I was very worried.
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11/26/20, 11:11 PM
i just cant get over how well written this is. i especially think the part from where liam finds out theres a trigger phrase to the point where ken finally plays the trigger is wonderful. really some exceptionally hot writing. maybe the only thing i could even ask for would be the trigger process lasting longer but it extremely hot none the less. i literally cant wait for the next installment.
Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 10:44 PM
Damn that was a wild sexy ride. Thank you for it, i hope there's more.
11/26/20, 10:42 PM
Oh, the other thing I wanted to mention is, Eric seems practically unable to resist ramping up his enabling of the boys' boyish behavior in the same vein as Ken. In the early chapters, all his private thoughts are about how utterly strange it is, but gradually over the course of each night, he can't focus on the thoughts of strangeness for as long, and just defaults to acting in the same enabling, prodding, coaxing way as Ken. I really think it's inconceivable that Eric isn't being unknowingly manipulated, himself.
Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 10:40 PM
I was raised Aesir from age 7 and I honor the old ways. Normally I would object to an Odinic sexual fantasy but Mate; what an incredible story of embodiment, possession and transformation. I'm awed at it's potency. Good on you!!!
11/26/20, 10:35 PM
My tl;dr I guess is, every time *any* character but Ken ever thinks of doing anything which would interfere with Ken's supposed experiment, they start rationalizing wildly out-of-character things, and while Liam is usually shown to be aware he is making these rationalizations, Eric really, really doesn't - even though his rationalizations as to why he doesn't interfere get really wacky and deeply irrational when you take a step back from them. I think Ken pre-conditioned these characters to achieve these results, and furthermore I think that Eric is a straight-up unreliable narrator and has been hypnotized himself, which skews the very perspective of the story.