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11/25/20, 10:28 PM
Quite dark, but a very well-written and arousing story. I'm intrigued as to where you will take the story next and what will happen to Eric.
Nov 25, 2020
11/25/20, 10:10 PM
As much as I love reality change, I feel like this story might be even better without it--seeing Josh struggle with boners and brainlessness at work could make this feel more like a descent (for both him and the audience). Fun read regardless!
11/25/20, 7:51 PM
This story is amazing! Will you be adding this story to the Drone World storyline?
Nov 25, 2020
11/25/20, 7:45 PM
Right up my alley. Love it.
11/25/20, 7:41 PM
stop with the scary and comparison to rape for fucks sake its fiction Hes writing an amazing story
Martin
11/25/20, 7:18 PM
First of all, it's a fantasy and as such not subject to whatever judgment we impose on real-life acts. This site is full of stories of people getting stripped of their decency or mental capacity against their will. Having said that, I have to admit that one thing gives me a somewhat uncomfortable feeling. The characters become way too toddler-like. With their toddler-speech and obviously complete obliviousness for their own bodily functions. I don't mind mental regression, even to the extreme (being reduced to a mindless drone is way more extreme, for example), reading about 3-year-old children in the body of grown men is giving me uncomfortable shivers. Especially if you show them in a sexual context. Is this just me? I don't want to be a killjoy. The story is hot, the transformation, especially of Liam, is really arousing to me, but I could do without that last extreme step. If they were giggling, sexualized idiots, but still grown up idiots, they could still be into dirty feet and careless nudity. But this infantile behaviour just makes this very uncomfortable and hard to enjoy for me. And the all too real daycare scenario just adds another layer on top of this. Still, I'm intrigued and curious where this is going to, the story is hot and interesting enough for me to push my discomfort aside. So please don't be offended, dear author, I just wanted to give an honest opinion here.
11/25/20, 7:17 PM
I agree with Hypnothrill, I just don't see where this could go, and this scenario seems to be more horror than erotica, based on the amoral hypnotist and unnerved future subjects on display. While I won't say some can't like this sort of thing, reading it made me feel uneasy.
11/25/20, 6:56 PM
@ParadoxBear I do have plans to return to Montana Jackson, I'm simply lacking direct inspiration atm, but in the nebulous "someday" it'll happen :)
11/25/20, 6:38 PM
I recognize the potential discomfort here, so there is a disclaimer at the top. To me, being so brutal in saying "a face like that deserves it" (paraphrase) was kind of the point - it's so off-the-rails that a judge of all people would say that, that it really demonstrates the power of the magic salve. And it's also a fantasy that a part of me embraces and a part of me recognizes it's a priveledge in some ways to be able to have such a fantasy; I've never been so blatantly dehumanized and objectified and sexualized in my life, and the kinky part of me fantasizes about it sometimes. At the same time, people, usually women, do experience these sorts of attitudes and it's pretty much always unwelcome, and I don't mean to disregard that. Kinks, fetishes, and fantasies are not usually logical and do not represent my general worldview.
11/25/20, 6:33 PM
this is so wicked! and awesome! oh, the total taking away of Liam's mental agency... what did he expect? he saw that the shit worked on benny and STILL went for it? lunacy. i love fiction where we can really explore the fucked up aspects of possibility in fantasy, and this is just another epic example. the mental regression is so sweet and adorable, and Ken's demeanor is so blithely chilling. even Eric is a shitty person for KNOWING this is going down and just... letting it. its wonderful and i just wanted to thank you for it. dark stories like this are a treat, can't wait for the next chapter!