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easdf
11/25/20, 11:37 PM
I'll start off by saying that the rape subject wasn't supposed to be in the comment. I had two drafts one being overly serious, but I accidentally copies more than I wanted from the first one making the final product very confused and too extreme, so I'm sorry about that. I also want to say again that I think your writing is great. You know who to build tension and I know that part of my reaction was because I projected myself onto Liam (which is amazing story telling wise). I think that Martin said it much better than I and said that it went a bit over the edge, especially with the sexual toddler thing. I thought about it and I don't know why, but transforming the unaware is less "scary" in my mind than transforming the aware. Again I apologise if I made anyone feel uncomfortable or made you feel like your story isn't good. I'm waiting for the next chapter :)
11/25/20, 11:31 PM
@Martin: I've felt the same way about this story from the beginning. It is expertly written, mind! But for me, there's a big difference between the typical dumbing down seen on this website (mentally slow and apathetic/focused only on sex and muscle, but still capable of taking care of the self) and the pure mental regression seen here. I'm sorry, but I don't find fully-grown adults acting like helpless toddlers sexy at all. I find it chilling and sad. Plus the fact that the author has grounded the story in realism somehow makes it worse. The discussion of a group home for mentally impaired adults reminds the reader that this kind of severe mental impairment DOES exist in the real world, that there are actual people who never move beyond the mental capacity of toddlers. Plus let's face it--the victims in this story may have fully grown bodies, but they have been completely mentally regressed to children who CANNOT consent and have NO IDEA what sex means. I do realize that it's "just a story" and "just a fantasy," but the attention to detail and firm realism grounding the story make the issues of consent and impairment seem all the harsher.
Nov 25, 2020
Lusty Stallion
11/25/20, 11:11 PM
Thanks for the description man. Really enjoyed your work!
Nov 25, 2020
11/25/20, 10:33 PM
all the best stuff in this! Love it!
11/25/20, 10:28 PM
Quite dark, but a very well-written and arousing story. I'm intrigued as to where you will take the story next and what will happen to Eric.
Nov 25, 2020
11/25/20, 10:10 PM
As much as I love reality change, I feel like this story might be even better without it--seeing Josh struggle with boners and brainlessness at work could make this feel more like a descent (for both him and the audience). Fun read regardless!
11/25/20, 7:51 PM
This story is amazing! Will you be adding this story to the Drone World storyline?
Nov 25, 2020
11/25/20, 7:45 PM
Right up my alley. Love it.
11/25/20, 7:41 PM
stop with the scary and comparison to rape for fucks sake its fiction Hes writing an amazing story
Martin
11/25/20, 7:18 PM
First of all, it's a fantasy and as such not subject to whatever judgment we impose on real-life acts. This site is full of stories of people getting stripped of their decency or mental capacity against their will. Having said that, I have to admit that one thing gives me a somewhat uncomfortable feeling. The characters become way too toddler-like. With their toddler-speech and obviously complete obliviousness for their own bodily functions. I don't mind mental regression, even to the extreme (being reduced to a mindless drone is way more extreme, for example), reading about 3-year-old children in the body of grown men is giving me uncomfortable shivers. Especially if you show them in a sexual context. Is this just me? I don't want to be a killjoy. The story is hot, the transformation, especially of Liam, is really arousing to me, but I could do without that last extreme step. If they were giggling, sexualized idiots, but still grown up idiots, they could still be into dirty feet and careless nudity. But this infantile behaviour just makes this very uncomfortable and hard to enjoy for me. And the all too real daycare scenario just adds another layer on top of this. Still, I'm intrigued and curious where this is going to, the story is hot and interesting enough for me to push my discomfort aside. So please don't be offended, dear author, I just wanted to give an honest opinion here.