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Martin
11/25/20, 7:18 PM
First of all, it's a fantasy and as such not subject to whatever judgment we impose on real-life acts. This site is full of stories of people getting stripped of their decency or mental capacity against their will. Having said that, I have to admit that one thing gives me a somewhat uncomfortable feeling. The characters become way too toddler-like. With their toddler-speech and obviously complete obliviousness for their own bodily functions. I don't mind mental regression, even to the extreme (being reduced to a mindless drone is way more extreme, for example), reading about 3-year-old children in the body of grown men is giving me uncomfortable shivers. Especially if you show them in a sexual context. Is this just me? I don't want to be a killjoy. The story is hot, the transformation, especially of Liam, is really arousing to me, but I could do without that last extreme step. If they were giggling, sexualized idiots, but still grown up idiots, they could still be into dirty feet and careless nudity. But this infantile behaviour just makes this very uncomfortable and hard to enjoy for me. And the all too real daycare scenario just adds another layer on top of this. Still, I'm intrigued and curious where this is going to, the story is hot and interesting enough for me to push my discomfort aside. So please don't be offended, dear author, I just wanted to give an honest opinion here.
11/25/20, 7:17 PM
I agree with Hypnothrill, I just don't see where this could go, and this scenario seems to be more horror than erotica, based on the amoral hypnotist and unnerved future subjects on display. While I won't say some can't like this sort of thing, reading it made me feel uneasy.
11/25/20, 6:56 PM
@ParadoxBear I do have plans to return to Montana Jackson, I'm simply lacking direct inspiration atm, but in the nebulous "someday" it'll happen :)
11/25/20, 6:38 PM
I recognize the potential discomfort here, so there is a disclaimer at the top. To me, being so brutal in saying "a face like that deserves it" (paraphrase) was kind of the point - it's so off-the-rails that a judge of all people would say that, that it really demonstrates the power of the magic salve. And it's also a fantasy that a part of me embraces and a part of me recognizes it's a priveledge in some ways to be able to have such a fantasy; I've never been so blatantly dehumanized and objectified and sexualized in my life, and the kinky part of me fantasizes about it sometimes. At the same time, people, usually women, do experience these sorts of attitudes and it's pretty much always unwelcome, and I don't mean to disregard that. Kinks, fetishes, and fantasies are not usually logical and do not represent my general worldview.
11/25/20, 6:33 PM
this is so wicked! and awesome! oh, the total taking away of Liam's mental agency... what did he expect? he saw that the shit worked on benny and STILL went for it? lunacy. i love fiction where we can really explore the fucked up aspects of possibility in fantasy, and this is just another epic example. the mental regression is so sweet and adorable, and Ken's demeanor is so blithely chilling. even Eric is a shitty person for KNOWING this is going down and just... letting it. its wonderful and i just wanted to thank you for it. dark stories like this are a treat, can't wait for the next chapter!
EJG
11/25/20, 6:25 PM
Ah well. I can only hope it continues. One lone submissive fan holding out. left fantasizing about Chads butch Daddy and the newly minted sluts dominating MASTER Pietro ???
EJG
11/25/20, 6:23 PM
It's a fantasy. Though it might be too much for others. I kinda like it,but thats just my fetish. And that's just the crux of it. It's just fantasy, not to be represented as real.
11/25/20, 6:15 PM
Very spooky. It gave me a horny "It Follows" and definitely was a pleasure to read.
Zac
11/25/20, 6:10 PM
The build-up in this chapter is delicious – I feel like Fred: so turned on but unable to cum without the "permission" of another chapter!
easdf
11/25/20, 5:52 PM
Okay, this is getting scary. Really. mental regression is one thing, but when the subject knows what is going to happen and says "no" and the regressor goes on anyway it's not okay. It's not rape, it's taking his personality and his conscious away from him. For me it's worse than murder because the you in you has been killed, your body is hijacked but everyone else won't know it's not you. I know it's your story and this is your style, but I implore you, write the good and RIGHT ending. give them their mind back