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nycboot
11/24/20, 5:37 PM
I've been following this story and read the latest installment when it was issued. But then suddenly it hit me that the scene with Liam at Eric's bed was so cute and kinda hot (for those into that). I think what made it hot was not the "sex" but Mindwiper's lovely characterization of Liam regressing, looking at the floor like a guilty child. Really, very nice! I look forward to see the next chapter.
11/24/20, 4:12 PM
An asteroid would have more materials than our planet. Multiple asteroids even more so. So extracting resources doesn't make much sense.
11/24/20, 4:12 PM
Thank you, Bobby...Of course, your correct. I'm not very good at proof reading & a few times it seems my ideas jumped ahead of my fingers and I missed a word, here or there...So glad you still seemed to enjoy it !
11/24/20, 2:56 PM
loved this! Hoping for much more!
Anonymous
11/24/20, 2:48 PM
excellent
Nov 24, 2020
11/24/20, 2:36 PM
I like it. Hopefully it's the start of something new for both of you.
11/24/20, 2:27 PM
> In fact, I never saw Rugby Boy as being anything other than a minor character – Snake’s BF/ boy. It's truly a testament to your skills as a writer, and a plotter in particular, that Rugby Boy's arc from Snake's submissive love interest to his equal and an independent man feels like it was intended from the get-go, and not just a happy side-effect of you deciding that you had to stick with the "realistic" version of events that stemmed from the Deputy's rebirth. A serendipitous side-effect of plot-crafting, and I'm completely here for it. > I have the beginnings of an idea for Rugby Boy – you’ll see me plant the seed in 21. As you mentioned on the discussion thread, you see Book Two as being about finding out who among the cast is wheat, and who are weeds. I'm very curious for a hint of what you have planned for our favorite rugger.
11/24/20, 2:16 PM
Great story! keep it up!
11/24/20, 2:05 PM
> And those tropes almost necessarily force the character who is being protected into a passive role in the narrative. > In fact, I never saw Rugby Boy as being anything other than a minor character -- Snake's BF/ boy. (Notice how he never got a name?) It wasn't until the plot began developing that Rugby Boy's role began to become more important -- no one was more surprised than me when his transformation became the climactic event of Book Two. > ...but now they are equals; Snake can’t lean on his psychic influence over Rugby Boy to control him anymore. I look forward to Rugby Boy being more assertive in Book Three. > I have the beginnings of an idea for Rugby Boy -- you'll see me plant the seed in 21.
11/24/20, 1:29 PM
Ironically, getting an alien symbiont that's going to be whispering in his ear to make more plants and convert more Hosts may actually do wonders for Rugby Boy's autonomy in Book Three. I love Rugby Boy and Snake to death, but looking back over Book Two, it's obvious that Rugby Boy hasn't had a crazy amount of personal agency in the story- he's been Snake's plus-one the whole book, doing things because Snake either tells him to or uses his psychic control over Rugby Boy to make him do it. He was very much the prince/beau-in-distress to Snake's knight-in-leather-armor. And those tropes almost necessarily force the character who is being protected into a passive role in the narrative. But now that Rugby Boy has fallen prey to the very peril that Snake wanted to protect him from- by Snake's own hand, in an ironic twist- well, there's nothing keeping Rugby Boy playing beau-in-distress anymore. Sure, all those loads Rugby Boy took will probably still give Snake some influence over Rugby Boy, but now they are equals; Snake can't lean on his psychic influence over Rugby Boy to control him anymore. I look forward to Rugby Boy being more assertive in Book Three.