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Jun 22, 2017
11/24/20, 11:16 AM
Thanks for the compliments, @Training Obedience! Just so you know, the story continues in the ["Valhalla-14" series](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/105195).
Jun 22, 2017
11/24/20, 10:47 AM
Loved it, so hot!! I found myself craving to be assimilated myself! I'd love to have gotten even more graphic details about the appearance of the alien bodies and the way they take over the hosts. My favorite part was how the Master was birthed from one man and directly latched onto another. I was picturing it's birthing slime lubricating it as it invaded Captain Hawk's ass. Keep up the excellent work!
11/24/20, 10:24 AM
This is so so good. I hope it's gonna have a bad ending lmao, stories like that usually have a nice ending. Well, anyway, keep up the amazing work!
11/24/20, 9:16 AM
I sax it coming that Gary bad been hypnotized by the teacher, but it's a really nice story. However, there are time where it feels like a word is missing.
11/24/20, 8:42 AM
Cool to see you post here! Always enjoy your literary outpourings ;) super hot!
11/24/20, 7:36 AM
I'm sorry, there are still a few mistakes in phrasing & my fingers still tend to sometimes slip while I'm typing...I'm not very good at proof reading, so I hope you'll understand & let-it-slide...This is my third chapter in just three days. I know [if you've been kind enough] to read all three chapters, the story is jumping all around. I just find the ideas come into my head & I go where they lead : However, I promise that eventually, Gary will find himself back at the gov. mind altering lab...Thank you all for your consideration!
11/24/20, 6:08 AM
great story. Could well be the beginning of a great series.
Jul 23, 2020
11/24/20, 5:08 AM
What an interesting premise. I'm glad I decided to read this
silverbuho
11/24/20, 3:55 AM
One of the best stories I've read in a while! Keep it up 👍👍
11/24/20, 3:53 AM
Great work. Particularly enjoyed the main character was feeling shy for a while before accepting his new gay feelings. And the best friend was quite enjoyable hot, too