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11/24/20, 7:36 AM
I'm sorry, there are still a few mistakes in phrasing & my fingers still tend to sometimes slip while I'm typing...I'm not very good at proof reading, so I hope you'll understand & let-it-slide...This is my third chapter in just three days. I know [if you've been kind enough] to read all three chapters, the story is jumping all around. I just find the ideas come into my head & I go where they lead : However, I promise that eventually, Gary will find himself back at the gov. mind altering lab...Thank you all for your consideration!
11/24/20, 6:08 AM
great story. Could well be the beginning of a great series.
Jul 23, 2020
11/24/20, 5:08 AM
What an interesting premise. I'm glad I decided to read this
silverbuho
11/24/20, 3:55 AM
One of the best stories I've read in a while! Keep it up 👍👍
11/24/20, 3:53 AM
Great work. Particularly enjoyed the main character was feeling shy for a while before accepting his new gay feelings. And the best friend was quite enjoyable hot, too
Anonymous
11/24/20, 3:33 AM
The exposition is sort of exhausting
giveintothemusk
11/24/20, 3:28 AM
This has been fantastic!
11/24/20, 3:13 AM
dont return them how they were before or better yet, write how you were planning to. I find it strange people thinking this is somehow scary being this is fiction Doing a great job
11/24/20, 1:46 AM
One got in Chancery, then there were four...another fantastic chapter! The muscle growth and transformation in this one was particularly hot. We're left with Jen, Sebastian, Victor, and Theo...Victor's nasty behavior (boy, I dislike "alpha" nonsense) seems to exonerate him. My money for the impostor, if there is one, is still Theo, or the "average" Sebastian. Although I may have to go back and check to see if anyone else made contact with the outside world...if they did and DIDN'T transform, that must make them the guilty party! Time for a reread before we go out to sea to hunt for red herrings...
11/24/20, 1:26 AM
just read thru all this in one sitting keep up the goid work.