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11/24/20, 10:24 AM
This is so so good. I hope it's gonna have a bad ending lmao, stories like that usually have a nice ending. Well, anyway, keep up the amazing work!
11/24/20, 9:16 AM
I sax it coming that Gary bad been hypnotized by the teacher, but it's a really nice story. However, there are time where it feels like a word is missing.
11/24/20, 8:42 AM
Cool to see you post here! Always enjoy your literary outpourings ;) super hot!
11/24/20, 7:36 AM
I'm sorry, there are still a few mistakes in phrasing & my fingers still tend to sometimes slip while I'm typing...I'm not very good at proof reading, so I hope you'll understand & let-it-slide...This is my third chapter in just three days. I know [if you've been kind enough] to read all three chapters, the story is jumping all around. I just find the ideas come into my head & I go where they lead : However, I promise that eventually, Gary will find himself back at the gov. mind altering lab...Thank you all for your consideration!
11/24/20, 6:08 AM
great story. Could well be the beginning of a great series.
Jul 23, 2020
11/24/20, 5:08 AM
What an interesting premise. I'm glad I decided to read this
silverbuho
11/24/20, 3:55 AM
One of the best stories I've read in a while! Keep it up 👍👍
11/24/20, 3:53 AM
Great work. Particularly enjoyed the main character was feeling shy for a while before accepting his new gay feelings. And the best friend was quite enjoyable hot, too
Anonymous
11/24/20, 3:33 AM
The exposition is sort of exhausting
giveintothemusk
11/24/20, 3:28 AM
This has been fantastic!