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11/24/20, 3:13 AM
dont return them how they were before or better yet, write how you were planning to. I find it strange people thinking this is somehow scary being this is fiction Doing a great job
11/24/20, 1:46 AM
One got in Chancery, then there were four...another fantastic chapter! The muscle growth and transformation in this one was particularly hot. We're left with Jen, Sebastian, Victor, and Theo...Victor's nasty behavior (boy, I dislike "alpha" nonsense) seems to exonerate him. My money for the impostor, if there is one, is still Theo, or the "average" Sebastian. Although I may have to go back and check to see if anyone else made contact with the outside world...if they did and DIDN'T transform, that must make them the guilty party! Time for a reread before we go out to sea to hunt for red herrings...
11/24/20, 1:26 AM
just read thru all this in one sitting keep up the goid work.
11/24/20, 1:25 AM
A good premise but a bit short, i would have like it fleshed out some more. I too was hoping the cop would take him home to play with. I also wonder if the guy has any family and what they would say and do with their family member made into a himbot for stealing!
11/23/20, 11:35 PM
Too long for my taste but otherwise, I loved it!
11/23/20, 10:45 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby - Heh. The thing is Billy never really had a choice. ;) And what you said of Jared is all true as well (except for being asked/choice to conform, but he was always being forced to become a prep anyway). Thanks for reading and that you love my stuff.
11/23/20, 10:41 PM
"On tonight's episode of Locked Up Abroad, a bi-lingual French Canadian rugby boy almost pretending he wasn’t locked in a jail cell in a foreign country fucking an alien flower. But first, a message from our sponsor 1-800-FLOWERS....." I'm in love with Rugby Boy now more than ever. Losing his humanity with defiance and anger. I would have blown him on my knees the second he ripped off the cell door. And never being a real fan of Snake, I was glad to see Rugby Boy knock him to the ground. And the attitude he's approaching the Great One with....I trust you in whatever plan you have my Rugby Boy!!! I think I'll take the hour and a half drive up to the border and stare northward pining for my Rugby Boy.
11/23/20, 10:20 PM
I loved the story although I must it would have been interesting if the same choice to Jared or Jareth was given to conform and he reluctantly did it both out of fear of no escape and/or to be with his best bro. While I do love dark endings sometimes you can still have both. Also welcome back love your stuff.
11/23/20, 9:57 PM
can't wait for more
11/23/20, 9:16 PM
So wish there was more of this; I come back to this again and again. Great work!