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11/23/20, 4:55 PM
I loved this story! I can't wait for the next installment, or anything else you may choose to publish.
easdf
11/23/20, 3:41 PM
I'm so glad you're back and writing! though please consider giving Benny and Liam their smarts back. As you said yourself, in the regression there's something of losing yourself and while for a period that can be cool, forever is scary
Nov 23, 2020
11/23/20, 2:52 PM
I like this one, how is the next Small Town Story? (I'm just asking, not demanding)
11/23/20, 2:28 PM
I wonder if Ken is somehow messing with Eric too or he's just a such a perv. I also wonder if there is a way to get Ben and Liam back to normal when the experiment's over or if it's something permanent. Like, it's so hot but feels so wrong to leave them like that at the same time.
11/23/20, 1:43 PM
Very hot second chapter! Please keep going.
Anonymous
11/23/20, 12:09 PM
I'm really intrigued by this story and can't wait to see where it ends up!
11/23/20, 11:11 AM
Oh I know your story very well. I **LOVE** that story. Thanks for it! :) I guess I always thought it could use a little more personality change to goody-goody. However, the "sophisticated Country Club" version is great, too, no doubt. As I said, same umbrella for me. I guess I more think of the Dilton type growing up into the Country Club type, if that makes sense. And I prefer writing the teen/twenty-something (younger) set of the spectrum, so that's why my characters behave in that fashion. (heh) And for the record, anything other than preppy qualifies as "bad boy" >:)
11/23/20, 10:59 AM
I've just got a very different impression of "preppy," I guess. Here's my story on this theme (adapted from a straight story I found on MCStories), ["The (Gay) Neighborhood"](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/2243) I keep meaning to write more stories in this universe, because I do enjoy it quite a bit.
11/23/20, 10:52 AM
Hypnothrill - Both Dilton and English aristocrat fall under the same umbrella/character type for me. And no, not a 'short hand'....preppy is preppy... and skater is skater.... I've been into this idea for about 35 years now. For me those types just also happen to mean that one is "good" and the other is "bad" :)
11/23/20, 10:44 AM
Hey, it's your fantasy, and you should write what turns you on. For me, however, there was a weird disconnect between the two main discourses in the second half of the story. You were listing all those brand names (e.g. Ralph Lauren), which made me think of the iconography of the brands (and their preppy, but quite athletic and masculine models). And then you had the dialogue, in which William sometimes sounded like a 1950s-style nerd (like Dilton in the old Archie comics) and sometimes sounded like an English aristocrat out of an old Noel Coward play. I think you're probably using "preppy" as a shorthand for "good boy" and "skater" as a shorthand for "bad boy," but for me, the term "preppy" and the clothing brands you describe just conjures up a very different character type.