Hey, it's your fantasy, and you should write what turns you on. For me, however, there was a weird disconnect between the two main discourses in the second half of the story. You were listing all those brand names (e.g. Ralph Lauren), which made me think of the iconography of the brands (and their preppy, but quite athletic and masculine models). And then you had the dialogue, in which William sometimes sounded like a 1950s-style nerd (like Dilton in the old Archie comics) and sometimes sounded like an English aristocrat out of an old Noel Coward play. I think you're probably using "preppy" as a shorthand for "good boy" and "skater" as a shorthand for "bad boy," but for me, the term "preppy" and the clothing brands you describe just conjures up a very different character type.

@cleancuthaircut - 'ever'! Golly, thanks! And good boy for having clean cut hair! @dannylyndin - Glad you want more. Only when I can come up with something. I don't want these preppifications to be merely rehashes, hence the new way of doing it in this one. @Niemand63 - yay! It's hot! And good! Happy to please! @Readytochange - You CAN be a good boy. Just put on a polo and you'll be on your way >:) C'mon, you're Ready, right? @Mikeinlthr - Glad you like it! Complete with? That's what I **do!!** @FreewillFL - Thanks! You're most welcome! @Hypnothrill & New Guy in Town - In my view, a good preppy boy **is** old-fashioned, overly formal and prissy. And yes, I was going for a "180" contrast of sorts so as to make the transformation extreme. If by out of character you mean the prep wouldn't suddenly face-fuck a skater, I saw it as he realizes that he must be a good boy because his Sir wants him to. Plus if he doesn't do it, he will lose (let's say about) six walk-in closets worth of wardrobe from every major preppy brand. Just think about that - not just a few pairs of loafers but every style in every color from every company. The entire set of colors and types of polos and all the colors and shades of chinos from every single preppy manufactuer. Not to mention an array of ties, bow ties, blazers, cable knit sweaters - all of every and each... WAY too much to pass up. It's not like he had to murder someone for it which a good preppy boy would surely not do. He just had to face-fuck a skater, once. For when he next has sex with this boy it will be his overly preppy pal Jareth. If you meant that a preppy boy wouldn't 'suddenly' be gay, it's a straight-to-gay fantasy :) If you meant it another some other way, sorry to disappoint. It's just how I see the whole process. Sounds like you found **something** to like anyway. :) Thanks all! So happy you're enjoying these. I know it's been a good long while, but know that I shall return again. It's just a matter figuring out some way to create a "new" story from "skater turns preppy". As I said, I don't want utter rehashes. Thanks again.

Amazing! I'd say more but don't want to give any spoilers.

this was amazing! love the work keep it coming !

Great story and great start! I really hope Fred tops Jacob and Jacob induces him into wearing little or no clothing in their room, and to think that any sexual contact between him and Jacob is absolutely normal. This was a very hot story!

hope the genie returns for some more life

Please make another

Nice! Loved it!!

Again, Maestro beats me to the punch. The preppy dialogue reminds me of the movie *Distrubing Behavior* and if you were going for the same effect (*ie* showing the changes to the two to the characters in the story and the reader) it would work. But it just seems out of place and character like Hypnothrill points out.

the 3 step process from dorky computer scientist, to horny computer slut, dipping agriculture teacher and finally to redneck jock plays great. a heavy tinge of the previous life is present in each step but by the time the transformation is complete we're left with a completely different dipping sex driven Man. if it motivates you to write more ill tell you about every time i shoot to your stories and every time i venture into smoking from your "encouragement". thanks man and eagerly awaiting your next piece -Z