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RicanCub
11/23/20, 7:04 AM
this was amazing! love the work keep it coming !
11/23/20, 7:03 AM
Great story and great start! I really hope Fred tops Jacob and Jacob induces him into wearing little or no clothing in their room, and to think that any sexual contact between him and Jacob is absolutely normal. This was a very hot story!
dannylyndin
11/23/20, 5:21 AM
hope the genie returns for some more life
Anonymous
11/23/20, 5:00 AM
Please make another
Anonymous
11/23/20, 4:28 AM
Nice! Loved it!!
11/23/20, 2:43 AM
Again, Maestro beats me to the punch. The preppy dialogue reminds me of the movie *Distrubing Behavior* and if you were going for the same effect (*ie* showing the changes to the two to the characters in the story and the reader) it would work. But it just seems out of place and character like Hypnothrill points out.
Anonymous
11/23/20, 2:21 AM
the 3 step process from dorky computer scientist, to horny computer slut, dipping agriculture teacher and finally to redneck jock plays great. a heavy tinge of the previous life is present in each step but by the time the transformation is complete we're left with a completely different dipping sex driven Man. if it motivates you to write more ill tell you about every time i shoot to your stories and every time i venture into smoking from your "encouragement". thanks man and eagerly awaiting your next piece -Z
11/23/20, 2:13 AM
LOVE the "retroactive wishes" device. Could launch a whole series.
11/23/20, 1:49 AM
Wow, le ofrce el culo y todo jajaj Me parece raro ese Ducka apareciendo asi de la nada y el prota aceptando asi como asi, quizas podria haberlo resuelto mejor :P Como sea, nada mal. Un par de faltas ortográficas pero nada que no se pueda perdonar.
easdf
11/23/20, 12:02 AM
While gang banging and feminization are mostly welcomed, the rape themes in this piece were too much in my opinion. Claiming he had a face that deserves that is a common justification to many sexual harassment cases, accepting this in court felt too much of blaiming the victim and crossing the line.